Raise a Little Hell - Comments

Oh my gosh o.o I missed this story. I love it! You're a phenomenal author

wellll my dear jess...
i would say that if you had to, just get rid of the twilight thing all together, i know that the monster attacked edward or whatever but in the end, right now it's more involved with callan and the brothers.
instead of giving yourself a headache, just go with the best picture in your mind.
i personally loved this chapter, and the fight between the brothers, and their utter confusion with callan haha. it's great. =]

I meant *lives...
fail.

You're not failing, this is a grand story!
I love where its at & Im pretty damn sure I'll love where its going.
Well you could just use them briefly & to your advantage...The twilight characters I mean.
Like maybe finding the boy (Edward) is what is going to keep them together while whats going on in their personal lifes is whats pulling them apart ....hmmm Idk I'm probably no help here but yeah.
(In my defense that WHOLE comment made sense and sounded alot better in my head) O_O
OR you could just kill them off, whatever works for you. Either way you do it the story will still be tops!

I don't think you're failing at it. :[ Yeah, possibly the Twilight characters we could do without, but you could always wrap up that side of the story and get on with whatever's going on with Callan. :] Loved the update! :] More soon.

"Just play along" lol. Great update, made me laugh and had me worried.

Keep it up love!

Holy crackers... I'm supposed to be packing right now and this story has got me entranced! Evil person and your juicy goodness of words!!

I loved how you tied the whole Michael/Lucifer thing into this as well. Makes me.... WANT MORE!!! RAWRRRR!

Ahem. Yes, very great job. Can't wait for another one!
-Lavada

When are you going to update again D:

UPDATE!!!

UPDATE!!!

FINALLY! Now, I would like it if you kept on writing, and hopefully faster than the last update...

Can I take the sword and stab the voice too?
Pleaseeee?

stupid voices...
It was a great chapter though, I loved it. =]

loves it.
I know I've said it before, but you're just so damn good at capturing their personalities, I can see it all in my mind when I'm reading. *hi-five*
keep it up :)

That was intense. I saw some little spelling and grammar errors, but I loved the story. Please write more? I need to know what happens next.

love love love fav supernatural story out there :)

wonderful update but MORE PLEASE?!?!?!!?

OOO!!!! Possessed!!!!
AHHHHHH!!!!
lol.
yea... idk....
lol. I love the line where dean is all like "Hey Esme.... Hey Esme and food."
lmao. laughed for a while on that. Idk... just thought it was uber funny. Could have been the tons of sugar, or the lack of sleep... but that little line made me laugh. lol.

Anywho... updates soon!

Well damn, she really is possessed isn't she? >.< I loved the update! More soon. :)

PS - Sorry for the short comment, I don't feel good. :(

Lol I forgot about the Cullens!
No matter the update was lovely. I liked the 'five o'clock somewhere' reference I was singing it while reading. Lol all in all I still think she should choose Sam. He is the nice one.

Course together they will have an evil creepy child. Aha.

OH.MY.GOD!
Woah ! like no joke ! This was great ! I mean interesting, Poor Callan .
I want more please & thank you (: