Lol You make Sam seem really dumb. :( And I'm kinda with you ^^^ (your username is long and confusing though *makes face* lol) But then again that might all be because I'm a Sam person... my friends just don't get him. *shakes head* I really like your story though!
Here I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for what happens next, and you go all cliff hanger on me!!! Not cool! Update soon plz, can't wait to find out what happens. btw.... loved the here kitty line. lol.
Okay for the last two chapters, I didn't read them all the way, I skimmed them and then I got bored and went and actually read them today and WOW. Chapters 5 and 6 are both equally amazing. That Lola chick really bugs me -.- I woulda slugged her. But Callen's too...right to do that. =]
Do you know how bad I feel? Like horrible, I mean it has taken me sooo long to read these updates... girl you deliver when you update... lol I loved this chapter, and well the whole story - Lola is certainly a b.i.t.c.h no offense :) sorry it took me so long to comment, but i certainly did love it :)
GAAAAAAH SAMMY LIKES CALLAN!!!! That could be problematic.... lol AND YELLOW EYES IS BACK!!! Not good...... I say BLAAUG!!! on the cliffhangers, YOUR SOO MEAN!!! hahaha update soon please!! :D:D:D:D:D:D
And I'm kinda with you ^^^ (your username is long and confusing though *makes face* lol)
But then again that might all be because I'm a Sam person... my friends just don't get him. *shakes head*
I really like your story though!