June 18th, 2007 at 09:24am
wow, that was really good! I love this line ----> their skin curling like photos from water damage
i agree with Aspara, you really do write amazingly well!
I also loved the last line aswell, how ironic that they are killed by one of the icons of Iowa
Omfg.
Or how ironic that they were trying to get to Iowa, and they reached it as they were killed by police. That's more like it. XDDDDD