The Four Stars - Comments

Whoooo I feel special cuz I think I'm that reader yaaaaay!!!! Well that wus a really good chapter all like suspenceful I guess and I don't think u made ne mistakes in that chapter but parts of it were a bit confusing congrats ur story is the bomb :) :)

I want u to no ur stories r my fav on this thingy and like there r errors but I don't ever pay enuf attention to really care all that much I fix them in my mind I no wut u ment but geneve is my favorite character I wish my boyfriend treated me like that sometimes all done hope u update real soon cuz I really wanna read the rest haha u should make one of the blondes get run over or something I would laf so hard tears came to my eyes and I can't really think of nething else jst aNted to comment cuz I no that when u don't get comments it feels like ur jst wasting ur time well I'd like to let u no that there's prlly more ppl readin it they're jst to lazy to go thrphe proble of comenting on it so
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Wow, that was great!! :D
Wow.. june the 18th. omg. Yay, IT WAS A GREAT UPDATE. So Romantic.. <3 x
The date should be awesome!! Keep it up my friend.. I hope to see this published soon, That would be great!! :) Thanks for updating. Hope to see some more. x

Thank you so much for your comments. I will make the corrections as soon as possible.

I'm very sorry for going away.. I did read the sixth chapter, and I couldn't comment.
Then I left mibba.. and exams came.. and well.. life sucked.
Anyway.. THE UPDATES WERE AWESOME!! i hope you havn't given up!!
Jullien Omg.. she's so stubborn. I felt so sorry for Geneve. ='[ That song he sang by Coldplay the shiver one.. I put it on and listened to it!! It was awesome!! I could almost picture Geneve staring at Jullien and singing it!! Dude.. You have talent!!
You did make a couple of mistakes.. I forgot to note them. One of which I remember where you writing 'steel' for steal. and for the third persons POV, you wrote me somewhere. I'm really looking forward to an update!! and I really want to know how this'll go. Excited to hearing from you. and I'm also sorry about the late reply. Thanks x x x

Hey everyone, I am not sure when I will post the next chapter. I really wanted to do it this weekend, but I have school work to do. Also I have exams to study for. Please wait patiently. I'm not sure what chapter five is going to entail, but I do have ideas. Thanks for all of your support.

He isn't in love with the teacher, he just likes her hair.

About the grammar errors I was so excited to post the story that I didn't check it. Thanks again, I'll soon correct the errors. I need to look over my work more.

Wow! You're right...I Love Chapter 4!
You put thier outfits and stuff...Omgad! Naughty boy...staying In Joanine's bed all night. haha! I love thier promise, and well, thier attatude towards the 'blondes' haha!
wow! fell in love with the teacher...what language is the 'miss' word, and the other words you put the definition to in brackets. So yeah, I'm guessing two of the friends will win the competition, and the other two dont; therefore they break the promise and split up...or...maybe not.
and hmm..mistakes...
What is it? I need to sleep. > I think you needed to put speech marks…

“Joanine! You have to get up to prepare ‘fro’ school now.” > for
‘The’ collect their schedules and head to the auditorium for assembly. > They
The students walk out of the auditorium, their chattering erupting again complemented ‘my’ laughter. >By
There! see ya! Keep it up...Get Good Grades! x-x-x

Omgad. Sorry I'm late...Life was...Getting in the way.
Yeah;; I've only read Chapter 3 now,, Its like 3:30am now here in London, I promise I'll read the rest later.
Chapter 3 was awesome! It was really sweet, and funny...well, it made me smile the whole way through.
Err..Mistakes...
The preparation is almost ‘finish’> finished
When I ‘say’ you sleeping earlier, you looked gorgeous>> I think say was ment to be saw.
...Rock On!...
Keep it up!

Thank you sooooo much. It really means a lot to me.

People who read my story please tell me what you like and do not like about the story. I will take your constructive criticism and work on the story to make it better for you.

this story makes me awww!!! pretty wonderful!!

Thanks rockinrose for pointing that out. I was gonna read it over, but seriously, I didn't want to keep my readers waiting. I'll correct that...soon. Oh yeah, I'm busy now so I don't know when chapter 2 part 2 will be out. Thanks everyone, you just made my day.

That was good, I Loved orlando Bloom <3, and the pics are awesome...
It was REALLY long, and SOOO AWESOME! You got a few spelling mistakes...Alrgith> alright & ak> ask...
Keep it up!
Looking forward to an update!
ROCK ON!
and...wow! Jullien and juvien!!! AWESOME! i Loved the ring <3

OMG!!! Thanks to you all that are commenting. I love you all, seriously. I will try my best to make the story awesome.

*suscribes*
It was good. I LOVED IT.
Continue writing, I want to know...how it'll be at school tommorow [in the story]...
You never know what to expect from a mibbian...
so yeah,
2 things.
1- Update soon
2- It's perfect.

Thank you guys so much for commenting. Please note this is a pretest. I am trying to make the story better. It is being rewritten.

this sounds so cool :)
loved it so far keep going please
i can't wait for you to write more so i can keep reading it :)

awesome story!!! u did a nice job!!!

Sure I will update. I will do it as soon as possible.

This is a message to everyone. I attend university, hence updating might be hard. But since you all love the story I will try my best to update as soon as possible.

Great opening :D *Subscribes*
Please update!