A Brand New Mourning. - Comments

I miss this story. :(. I still reread it from time to time though, cause I love it.

Heyy is this being updated anymore?

First off, I’m sorry I couldn’t comment sooner. As I have more free time, I’m currently trying to get to all the stories I’ve been desperately trying to review.

So I began reading today, after delaying myself to do it for quite some time. And let me tell you I wasn’t ready for this update. I mean, now I want to read everything. I want to know everything and it seems like a greedy thing to say but I’m sure I wasn’t the only one left curious at the end of it.

It began a little lazy for me. Maybe because I hadn’t picked up the story in a while and it was like slowly getting the threads back together and remembering the names and submerging myself completely into this story so far. By the middle of the chapter I was more than blanketed in the whole thing, once again your descriptions were so accurate and just right that it was hard not to find yourself in the middle of all that heat. The heat. I find details twice as important in chaptered stories, simply because you can’t keep telling the same thing all the way through it –reason I fail at them- and in this occasion I don’t know why you inserted the whole ambiance of heat but it made it very realistic and a nice change to begin with. After finishing reading, I vaguely related it to the bigger change that’s about to take place.

And it seems a little random, but I loved the chapter title. Excuse my disorganized train of thought, but it made me want to read and the way you tied it up with the ending was very nice.
Thought I should mention it.

Another thing I have to say is that even though the chapter, at the beginning, wasn’t quite doing it for me, I mean don’t get me wrong I loved all the dialogue and the heat and your words obviously, but I want to get emotionally attached to this. And to be honest with you, I wasn’t feeling it at the beginning. It sounds contradicting because then how did I end up so freaking jittery about reading absolutely everything? And that’s when I say you succeed as a writer.
Consider me officially in love with this. Officially.

I’m not even kidding because at some point, most likely while waiting with Gerard in the hospital, I just got this tugging feeling in my chest that was like oh boy, it’s not good news. I was trapped inside the plot and I kept thinking, it’s not good news.
Whatever they were telling Frank was not exactly good, was it? And then your description of the expression he was bearing when Gerard finally saw him had me all pins and needles and then there were no more words. It’s as if we are in trance just like the boys waiting for the imminent bombshell.
The last paragraph was probably my favorite. Also,
Instead he just seemed intent on walking to the end of the world.
I had the sudden need to walk along with him.

This chapter captivated me. I can hardly wait for what’s to come.
Beautiful update indeed.

Hey, sorry I haven't commented you or your stories in forever. I've got a life outside mibba now (it freaks me out that i can make human contact after being on mibba this long but w/e)
Anyways, WHAT'S WRONG WITH FRANK?!
He can't die or be ill and Gerard can't turn into a jerk.
Actually, I think I'd like Gerard to be a jerk/player for once
xo

wow. that was insanely well written. really :] except.. it's kind of depressing. in a good way ! haha I love that last line of that chapter, it's got a haunting feeling to it
i'm scared to know what the doctor said :\

wow. that was insanely well written. really :] except.. it's kind of depressing. in a good way ! haha I love that last line of that chapter, it's got a haunting feeling to it
i'm scared to know what the doctor said :\

amazing & your straving for touch story is on mcrf by a member named nypthamtime

Your stories amaze me. You have such an imaginative mind, that lets people feel the emotions of your stories, live the experiences. Your writing is outstanding.

I love how Gerard and Frank constrast but make each other so much, that their past-times and tastes are so similair, but their true selves are so different, it makes me think of my best friend's and my relationship.

Your stories are masterpieces, thank you for gracing us with such marvellous work.

wow this is beautiful, please update this soon, I just can't wait to know more.
You've made them such interesting characters, I just gah... this story is one of those stories I just know is gonna be good.
Not just because your the author

Sorry for the lack of comments, I've been really busy. But anyhoo. The last two updates (which I had realized I had not read) mezmerized me. I think.... this is your best work. Although it's really hard to say this considering all your work is beyond amazing.

I worry for both Frank and Gerard equally. I hope things get better soon, although I have this unnerving feeling they're going to get mush worse first.

Can't wait for the next update =]

awesome update

Incredible story. One of my favourites that I am reading at the moment without a doubt.
I love how you put so much description and detail in without it become tedious or repetitive. You even have some humor in there which isn't the usual boring stuff, and you don't use speech to make it sort of amusing at times, which is what a lot of people do.

The characters are amazing. I was wondering if the other three, Jasper, Greys and Chris are meant to represent the rest of the band. I'm not sure, but that's just what I have in my head. Mikey hasn't been mentioned yet, but I kind of imagined him as Greys. And seeing as he was adopted, you never know XD

Cliff-hanger- love it :D And I actually have no idea what could happen. I guessed the story would be all about Gerard changing and maybe Frank too or something, but it seems there's going to be drama too. It just gets better and better.

I'm looking forward to an update. :) Don't ever stop writing this story because I'd probably get withdrawal symptons XD

Amazing, simply amazing.
I can't wait for another chapter.
:)

i don't like the suspense

......of waiting for amazing updates!

but i'll accept it 'cause you've got a good reason. haha. xD

Simply incredible.
Mind blowingly beautiful, as always.
You put us all to shame, my dear.

(Sorry for a late comment ~ my internet was playing up and I couldn't get online :()
To answer your question, the update was purely AMAZING. :cheese:
SERIOUSLY.
Thank you so, so much for updating. This story is simply awesome. I have a feeling it may become one of my favourites, even. :cute:
I really can't wait to read another chapter. I'm dying to know what will happen next, and what's wrong with Frank.
Thank you so much for writing. YOU RULE.
:hug: :arms:

I don't know how to say this, but you've somehow got me hooked by just a few chapters. No, wait, I was hooked just by reading the short summary. I love this, even though you don't update as often as I'd hoped. It would be very mean if you don't update again soon, because now we're all hanging on a cliff, not knowing what's about to happen. And you are the only one who can tell us. You pull us in, and you lock us here, so we can't ever get away from you - you write so amazing!
well, perhaps this was a little wier comment, but still, update soon, and I love it.

xo

Gah! I really want to know what's going on with Frank! It's starting to freak me out.

I don't know if you're still working on this story or not, but ...
I'm 100% in love with it! :cheese:
The storyline is gorgeous, and it is written absolutely beautifully.
I adore the way you're developing the characters so much ~ not many other stories on Mibba express their personalities and feelings as well as this story does.
I hope you haven't left this story completely. I really want to read more.
I don't mind how long it takes before this story becomes more active ~ it will definitely be worth the wait, I can tell. If you're taking a break from this story, for any reason at all, I will continue waiting and anticipating for its return. Take as much of a hiatus from it as you wish ~ I'll still be loyal to this story when you get back to it.
Update as soon as you want to, and I hope you will.
:hug: :arms:

I really enjoyed the three firt chapters of this story. There's something that come over you sometime, that makes you write exiting and different. it's really a gift, and i know you will go far in writig.

I love th idea of your new story, and i am subcribd to both this one and that one.

xo