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  • Jordann23

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    This is such an amazing story! Keep up with the wonderful writing!
    July 25th, 2009 at 09:24am
  • HarperB82

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    So sad that it's done! I loved it though! I'm glad MJ and Gabe worked it out! I'm glad Vicky and Brendon are getting married too! Loved it! :)
    March 19th, 2009 at 11:47pm
  • The Academy Island

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    I liked the ending, it wa so cute.
    March 19th, 2009 at 07:53pm
  • jirrithxx419

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    awww, such a cute ending! I'm glad that they got married, and that Vicky and Brendon are engaged!
    I'm gonna miss this...
    March 19th, 2009 at 06:43pm
  • captknights

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    NOOOOOOO! IT'S OVERR!
    March 19th, 2009 at 01:58am
  • William Beckett

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    Aww. Great ending! Sad that it's over but. Oh well there's probably more great ideas to come out from your mind!
    March 19th, 2009 at 01:58am
  • jirrithxx419

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    awww, she asked him! YAY!
    it's sad that it's just about over though :(
    March 19th, 2009 at 12:57am
  • HarperB82

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    This means only 2 chapters left :(

    Wow! This chapter was so intense! I'm so glad that Gabe came to her rescue and Vicky was smart enough to call the cops to go there! I'm really happy that Chris is going to jail. I hope he's going for a long time! Can't wait to see how it ends! Love it! :)
    March 18th, 2009 at 01:52pm
  • jirrithxx419

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    GO POLICE!! I'm so glad they came in when they did! otherwise it would have been messy!
    I heart this!
    March 18th, 2009 at 03:34am
  • Coheed Kilgannon

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    Vicky should totally get a statue made in honor of her awesomeness.

    but I'm glad Gabe didn't get hurt!!!! and that's right, Chris better get put in jail!!!

    I hope he gets ran over by a train....
    March 18th, 2009 at 02:47am
  • William Beckett

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    That. Was. So. Good!
    I actually thought for a minute there, that Gabe was going to get shot, luckily he didn't!
    I really enjoyed that chapter and I can't belive there's only two left?
    Update soon!
    March 18th, 2009 at 02:44am
  • The Academy Island

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    :O only three left!? Gabriel better kick his butt.
    3 chapters?
    No, I don't want it to end.
    March 17th, 2009 at 04:06pm
  • William Beckett

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    :O only three left!? Gabriel better kick his butt.
    March 17th, 2009 at 06:39am
  • jirrithxx419

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    ohs mans... I can't wait! Chris is gonna get his ass kicked! :D
    March 17th, 2009 at 04:44am
  • HarperB82

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    Aaahhh! Only 3 chapters left! I hope Gabe gets to her in time and beats the crap out of Chris! I hope that MJ and Gabe can work it out! I really like them together. Great update!
    March 17th, 2009 at 12:52am
  • jirrithxx419

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    She really is stupid...
    but I hope Gabe or someone saves her!
    March 16th, 2009 at 03:51am
  • HarperB82

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    See, I had a bad feeling. I hope someone comes to save her. I hope that she's strong enough to maybe fight him off - physically and mentally. I hate Chris! He's so slimey! Great update! Can't wait for more!
    March 16th, 2009 at 02:52am
  • captknights

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    NO! No, no. no, no, no, no! THAT CAN'T HAPPEN! NOT AGAIN! DON'T DO IT, CHRIS!
    March 15th, 2009 at 02:44pm
  • William Beckett

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    This is the part where Gabe rushes in and saves her right? RIGHT!?! Update soon, please!
    March 15th, 2009 at 05:38am
  • We Were Young;

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    More? Soon? Please?
    March 15th, 2009 at 04:14am