Love the story! Your a good writer but in your story, though, some of the things are contradictive like you'll have one of the characters do or say something and then in like the next chapter they'll be saying something opposite of before and some things are kinda repetitive not the story line, but what the characters say it's a really good story though can't wait til the next update. :-)
I love your story, and I'm glad you're going to continue with it even if the updates are slow. I know how busy life can get! Just keep up the good work :]