chapter 6-I lovee it, listening to guys talk, like just to other guys is always holarious for some reason cause if theres sappy stuff they are always saying "dude" or "man" to still make them seem all matcho XDD nicley done
chapter 5-LOve that chapter! that was funny about the weather, sounds like jake when i get into one of my "morning moods" but I dont ever have an actual reason XD anywho off to read more!
chapter 4- OMG wow that was really intense! keep it up and nah u should stop writing, if it makes you feel any better one of the two subscribers isnt me, cause I never subscribe to my friends stories since I can just get them off of my profile XD really good tho!
chapter 3-hahaha the bit about him being named after an old man and her being called sephy made me laugh...I wouldnt wanna be called sephy either! XDD niice work, and if the commenting every chapter thing is annoyin ill stop but its just the way ive always done things XDD
oh. mah. gaush.
amazing. i mean, sad, yes, but stiill amazing.