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  • Crash Poison

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    Finally!!!! Please update again soon! I love this story!!!
    July 21st, 2011 at 08:10pm
  • Imperfect;

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    I know! I'm sorry. >3<
    June 26th, 2011 at 02:21am
  • I Blame Genetics

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    Gaa! You haven't updated in forever!!! I love this!!! PLEEEEAAAASE update much more often!! Thank you muchly!!!!
    June 26th, 2011 at 12:56am
  • Imperfect;

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    No, it's okay. I guess it's about time someone told me that. XD
    Aw, thanks. ><;
    August 27th, 2009 at 01:40am
  • paperrwiings

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    I really didn't want to sound mean, but it came out that way. It's just a pet peeve of mine, I guess. Your story is great, and I'm rooting for you as a writer. Just tough love, I guess. =]
    August 26th, 2009 at 07:42pm
  • Imperfect;

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    Thank you! =)
    August 22nd, 2009 at 06:00pm
  • emseeare

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    This is getting really good. I can't wait for the next update! :)
    August 22nd, 2009 at 05:27am
  • Imperfect;

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    paperrwiings:
    Okay, I know you want comments. But threatening your readers by saying you'll delete the story if you don't get more comments makes me want to stop reading completely. You should write for YOURSELF, not for the appreciation of other people, strangers even. Comments should be an added bonus, not a must-have. Readers are less likely to want to read a story if they know they can't depend on the author to update no matter what, and if they know the author might delete the story if she/he is unhappy. How many comments do you want?! I think 3 pages worth of good comments for seven chapters is amazing! And the story is just now going some place! And you hardly ever update! Three pages is unbelievable!

    I'm not trying to be mean, and I apologize because I do know it sounds that way. I like your story, I just don't like how you're demanding comments....
    Wow, I didn't know that's how some people felt about that. Usually, when I read that from my subscribtions I hurry up and comment. =( I didn't know I sounded so... shallow. Thank you for pointing this out. Maybe next time I'll be more appreatative. ^^;
    August 21st, 2009 at 11:13pm
  • paperrwiings

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    Okay, I know you want comments. But threatening your readers by saying you'll delete the story if you don't get more comments makes me want to stop reading completely. You should write for YOURSELF, not for the appreciation of other people, strangers even. Comments should be an added bonus, not a must-have. Readers are less likely to want to read a story if they know they can't depend on the author to update no matter what, and if they know the author might delete the story if she/he is unhappy. How many comments do you want?! I think 3 pages worth of good comments for seven chapters is amazing! And the story is just now going some place! And you hardly ever update! Three pages is unbelievable!

    I'm not trying to be mean, and I apologize because I do know it sounds that way. I like your story, I just don't like how you're demanding comments....
    August 21st, 2009 at 10:15pm
  • Fabricated Violence.

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    I really liked it. You captured the emotion well :}
    And, oof, she's staying over at his house.
    Get in there! Jokes xD
    More soon please. Don't delete it. Please? :{
    August 21st, 2009 at 08:24pm
  • Imperfect;

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    Thank you!
    =)
    August 5th, 2009 at 09:59pm
  • AlmaRosa

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    I like long storys with good discriptions. Cant wait for a update
    August 5th, 2009 at 09:42pm
  • Imperfect;

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    Thank you so much for commenting!
    August 5th, 2009 at 07:58pm
  • a grave mistake.

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    It's sad but I really like it.
    August 5th, 2009 at 07:53pm
  • Imperfect;

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    ^^
    Thank you.
    August 5th, 2009 at 07:48pm
  • pagupagu

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    I love this story.
    update soon!! <3
    August 5th, 2009 at 07:46pm
  • Imperfect;

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    Thanks everyone for the comments!

    @Fabricated Voilence: lol really?
    I ran through the rain today.
    I was like "My story is coming to life? Where's Gerard?" lol
    July 18th, 2009 at 12:51am
  • Fabricated Violence.

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    Oh god. It's weird because I got splashed with a puddle too today o.o
    I loved it! :}
    More soon please.
    July 17th, 2009 at 09:54pm
  • taking back sunday.

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    I like the fact that he comes at the perfect times.
    July 17th, 2009 at 06:55pm
  • My Passion

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    DON'T DELETE! =)
    I like it! :(
    July 17th, 2009 at 06:37pm
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