oooooh! why did grandpa have to die? wait, so charlie's the slayer-guy, right? or is he a vamp? i dont remember and i dnt feel like going back and looking.
he seems like someone i would like...and im sitting up at 1:16am rereading ur story so i can remember whats going on...but i like evil...evil is more fun than good...like the clouds parting for zach...i cant believe he brought that up again! thats too good..he needs to be re-corrupted so he's evil again...like ur character...now i wanna watch Blood and Chocolate...
wow...psycho much? i like that guy...he kind of reminds me of the asshole cousin in Blood and Chocolate...he's an asshole, but MAJOR psycho...in B&C, the guy was a show-off...couldnt even kill Aiden....
Well next is what happens to the main characters when they are kids. This is all backstory, which is very important to the main story. Without it, you would have no idea what the hell was going on
Im working on it. I'm almost done with what happens in the 1980's. I want to post it all together. Of course I'll probally have a lot of time to write while I'm in school when I am bored after studying and waiting for everyone to get done with classes, so it will be posted a lot more frequently
dude, u need to write more...this is really exciting! believe it or not, i wanna read more of ur vampire porn thing...(haha, vampire porn...i kno its not, but that jut amuses the fuck out of me)