All You Wish For and All You Need - Comments

Well I'm hoping this ends soon. Not that I don't like it, but it does seem to be dragging on a bit. I think you should add more of a struggle to Arabella and give her some good to battle her crazy obsession with Anne. I'm pretty curious about the death eater and I'm sure you could spin something interesting with that. It would be interesting for Marcus' more protective side to show, perhaps bond a bit with Arnold or Richard. I didn't find the talk with Harry to be satisfying at all, especially considering the anticipation of his arrival. I'm sure his opinion of Marcus changed after seeing him with Anne. And speaking of Arabella once more, she DID once defend Marcus against the teachers when she hardly knew him so she obviously isn't a horrible person outside of this crazy jealous state she's in. She needs to get laid. How bout Arnold? And then Richard can fall for the girl he was arguing with. Diversity. Challenges and a perfect ending. Ta-Da!

Woo! Update! Glad your inspiration is sort of coming back haha

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Oh how I loved having breaks from college haha

Anywho....what's the deal with Arry?...I kinda wanna punch her in the face for being so shallow and narrow minded about this whole thing, ya know? And that seems kinda violent but she really needs a reality check haha

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Really, Arry? She just cant let Anne live her life can she? *sigh*

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ahh!! i absolutely cannot wait to see what will happen when Marcus' secret comes out!

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I love this story sooooooooooo much!!!!! Please update soon, pretty please.

YO!! update soon please!!!

oh my damn! when will Harry get there all ready?!?!? Update soon!!!

I absolutely have loved seeing Marcus' transition from where he started to where he is now. it has definitely been an interesting journey for the reader haha and i cant wait for the next update!

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update, update, update, UPDATE! ;D
i am going insane without this story. i dont know why i love it so much but i do. i've never been into harry potter but you've made me really get into it. update as soon as you can or i will end up in a mental instituion...that would not be pretty.

aw that was sweet. i like that Anne is having such a good impact on him!

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i refer back to my previous statement about Arrabella...she's creepin me out a little bit. i think it'd be nice to know what's going on in her head...just an idea though

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i know exactly what you mean. sometimes you just don't feel like doing stuff haha

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holy freakin' no way! is he gonna kill her?!!!!!!

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freakin' Arry...what the heck is her problem? she needs to get a life...really.

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Love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'll let you know if you win!!!

McGenius! Arry is being a McBitch. The ghosts should get her. lol. I hope Marcus fights those demons - I don't want him to end up like Molsyshorts. :O Loved.<3

^ hahaha Elizabeth...that was great! I love the creepy ghost voice.

hopefully Anne can save him from the evil clutches of his evil parents. I mean, how awkward would that be? One day Marcus is just sitting around doing homework and all of a sudden Voldie is just like 'that's the wrong answer!' ....dude

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*creepy ghost voice* Marcussssss...
You musn't leat Moldyshorts take youuuuu...
Anne will be your guideeeeee...
Follow my instructions or elseeeee....

*cough*
McYeah. Anne can save him from his demons but he has to let them to too. He muuust! Loved. <3

Awww. That was soo effing sweet. I love Marcus+Anne moments. <3