Sentimentality. - Comments

This is amazing.
Probably one of my favourite oneshots ever.
Nicely done.

What I enjoy the most is that the character never talks about any kind of feelings, its everything very... let's say, numb. It's like they can't feel, yet they need each other for some wicked reason that we don't know, but we sense that it lies somewhere in and between them.

It seems a good 'perfect proposal' because maybe this is an insult to the modern concept of 'marriage'. As I am slightly against getting married, I read some bittersweet conflits with that event that some people call 'the biggest day of my life'. It won't be for them. Actually, I don't think it will exactly happen. I have one reason: they want each other to stay like this, they are indifferent to whatever they might feel for each other.

This is pleasant, congrats! :cute:

that was fantastic. i loved how you kept that mystery in there. like that you didn't say who it was and stuff. ugh i suck at feedback. sorry.

very well written though :D i loved it.

Well I loved it. It was bittersweet. I don't know if that's the right word, but seeing as I'm the only commenter, you'd be thankful for any comment you got. It gives a new perspective on their personalities. How Frank asked it (I'm presuming it was him) just goes to show how much faith he had in their "relationship". Once again, loved it.

Extremely short, I know. But still, some con-crit would be fantastic.