A Wish Gone Wrong - Comments

Such a great story!!

I'd say... a ten!
Sorry for spamming this topic. Or as some people say "comment raping" your story. XD It was really good though! I shall now move on and go comment rape the sequel.
Maybe tomorrow.
Today, I shall keep thinking about this story and be really obsessed with it for a day. I think it deserves that. Or a complete obsession.
But you know, I can't do that very well. XD -points at myself- Short attention span is here.
I must keep complimenting you. I can't really read a story like that till the end, unless it's really good, so that's just amazing! It is a fabulous story to draw me into it like that.

You know, the thing up there... that says the rating or something? I don't think it should be two. XD
How can I affect that thing? It must be higher!

Epilogue
Beautiful! You know, I think I should cry now.
-one of my moments is happening in this space-
I applaud you! It was amazing!!! Short, but sweet.

Chapter 8
Made love? I'm immature, but I think I know what it means. XD I THINK I do...
It's awesome still though!

Chapter 7
Wow, I'm so glad I actually have time to read all this. It's so exciting! If I get kicked off the computer or something that like, I would be so sad. I need to read more. And I'll do that right now! :D

Chapter 6
Ooh, so exciting. More more! I like how you italicize what the TV says. It makes the text more prettier, not that that really matters... XD But still.
I just noticed the picture at the top. It's really pretty.

Chapter 5
I'm going to copy your way of indentifying the chapters lol.
Why do they sleep like that so suddenly? How mysterious. I must know more. :D
Even though you said you didn't put much effort into this, it was still beautiful.

Chapter 4
Beatiful and amazing. Gosh, I'm just repeating over and over my previous compliments. It's just too good! I can't wait to see what happens next.
The wish thing is so awesomely mysterious.

Omg! That was amazing! The use of sensory details was absolutely beautiful. Dylan is so sweet to be so dedicated to her. I can't believe how nice he is. Just so... perfect.
Is there a sequel to the sequel? Lol.

My word! The second chapter went beyond my expectations. It was awesome! I can't wait until I find more time to keep reading. I'll also read the sequel, since I heard there was one. :D

The beginning/prologue was absoulutely beautiful. I loved the pretty words and the wonderful atmosphere and tone they created. This is a marvelous piece of work. I shall be reading more later.
I am guessing that your later works have improved beyond this, if so, I congratulate you. :D

I loved the beginning and the end of this story, the middle I thought could've been longer and more detailed. I also liked the modern twist on the make-a-wish story line :)

WRITE THE SEQUEL PLZZZZ!
I loved the ending,by the way!

omgggg yes you should definitely write a sequel!

I love the story, its great and the ending as well ~
Write the sequel, I'm dying to read it
okay?

I love you now and forever too ~

Aww, I love the ending, it's so freaking cute *jumps up and down*
Lol, I'm beginning to wonder how much Harunio looks like his teddy-bear counterpart xP
Ne, are you gonna go with your sequal idea?!?!
Yay, I got a mention in the AN *sparkle sparkle* Thank you~! *glomps*

omgg cant wait for the last chapter :)

love you rach ~

omgggggg! moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! please update asap!