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  • bessie162

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    "kiss me Oli"
    ^^^ that really made my day, and oli being all cute and such, have i mention i really like this story???? haha.
    February 17th, 2009 at 07:18am
  • munch

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    That was a cute chapter! (And the couple prior were good, too!)
    Though I would have to say if a guy told me he sometimes was cliche with girls and all movie-like, I wouldn't be very swayed. I'd be prone to saying something along the lines of "So you use the cliche on other girls, too?" then kicking him in the shin and walking off.
    Good updates, though!
    I agree :lmfao Once again awesome update =)
    February 17th, 2009 at 06:03am
  • celiaeatsballz

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    mmm, I want to kiss Oli too (;
    great update.
    February 17th, 2009 at 05:09am
  • formerlyknownas

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    sofa king cute. nuff said. haha.
    February 17th, 2009 at 04:04am
  • formerlyknownas

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    sofa king cute. nuff said. haha.
    February 17th, 2009 at 04:04am
  • Hannah Maree;

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    aw, so cute. she's so innocent and adorable and he's trying to be a good guy, i like it.
    February 17th, 2009 at 03:04am
  • proverbial sunrise.

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    chapter19=socuteeee
    luvz it
    February 17th, 2009 at 02:35am
  • Dolls A Train Wreck

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    i think im going to rape your story haha!
    February 17th, 2009 at 02:19am
  • celiaeatsballz

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    I just started reading this, and I love it (:
    update soon.
    February 16th, 2009 at 09:44pm
  • Hannah Maree;

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    romantic oli is my favorite.
    February 16th, 2009 at 09:36pm
  • OliverSykes

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    I love love love this story
    February 16th, 2009 at 08:57pm
  • formerlyknownas

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    bro, it's like every time i check my email, you've added five more chapters!
    GAH they kissed. holycrap. so amazing. i can't wait for moreeeeeeeee!
    February 16th, 2009 at 08:36pm
  • Whoaishly Lame

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    That was a cute chapter! (And the couple prior were good, too!)
    Though I would have to say if a guy told me he sometimes was cliche with girls and all movie-like, I wouldn't be very swayed. I'd be prone to saying something along the lines of "So you use the cliche on other girls, too?" then kicking him in the shin and walking off.
    Good updates, though!
    February 16th, 2009 at 08:10pm
  • X abidab X

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    that was incredibly sweet
    awesome job
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    February 16th, 2009 at 05:48pm
  • Hannah.Mariee

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    YAY! They kissed, that chpater was cute. More soon?? Haha.
    February 16th, 2009 at 05:28pm
  • slashXdash

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    I'm one of the everyone!

    Wooot they kissed! :D

    Sorry my reviews are small and short but I can't find proper wording at the moment. especially since its 4 am right now and I've had too much coffee ;P

    Bring on the next update!! haahaa.
    February 16th, 2009 at 01:07pm
  • sh3nanigans

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    AWHHHH! ATTTHAHHBAHHHBAHHH!
    :'D

    That was sweet! Perfect!
    I loved it all the chapters!
    February 16th, 2009 at 12:34pm
  • bjkasjhbefjhb

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    yay =)
    February 16th, 2009 at 10:32am
  • kissthesky

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    Aha, I was pleasantly surprised to see that it WAS updated.
    You liar C; It was cute, it made me happeh <3
    February 16th, 2009 at 10:00am
  • munch

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    Aw the last chapter was adorable. I < this story lots and I can't wait for the next update =)
    February 16th, 2009 at 09:58am
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