Just Keep Breathing - Comments

This was kind of perfect, actually. I really, really enjoyed reading this story, thank you for writing it!

@ vonhejibergen
I think I was 15 when I started it, 4 whole years ago! haha hearing that means a ton to me

@ xmunch
Really? You are such a great writer and this was your first story! WOW, I'm really amazed and impressed. It was so cute, I love all your Oli Sykes stories.

@ vonhejibergen
Oh gosh, this was the first story I ever posted on here! Part of me hoped no one read it anymore haha but I'm glad you liked it!

This was an absolutely amazing story! Great job, I love it :)

mmhmmm finally finished!! awweee i didnt want it to end :( but i loved every bit of it! ♥

this story is mazing so far

i finally finished this story! :D ahh it was sooooooooo cute! n__n really nicely done i must say!

Gracious, Munchie~ Thanks for such an interesting 2 chapters. I'll keep reading to see how hot and heavy Elle and Oli get~ ;)

Man this story was so good.
I read it all in one night. Couldnt stop.
<3

i read this in a night :D
it was so good

<3

wowowowowowowowowowowow.

shayna funk is like my bestie and i saw you on her top friends thingy and WOWOWOW i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

you are verrry talented.

SEQUEL???? PLEAAAAAAAAAASE!

marissa
xox

Oh my god.
I am absolutely, positively in love with this story!
It is so amazing!
Dude.

Wow, I love it.
:D

HAha, I dunno how I did it, but I managed to sit through this AMAZING story and read all the way through it all in the course of...well from like 9 till now...which is 2 haha. It was totally worth it. I also would like to show you a very funny video of Oliver Sykes because it's just friggen hilarious. I hope you haven't seen it yet, though you probably have. Here it is! xD BTW I loved this story =D I also like the Tom Sykes one your doing now. It's great haha.

oLIVER sYKES!

K soooo.. I totally just stumbled upon this story and read it all in one sitting. and i'm bookmarking it cause hooollly mother it is friggin great. You seriously couldn't have written it any better, and you're a fuckin awesome writer :)

THE ENDDD.
I was totally prepared for a "I found someone new" ending.
But no they still love eachother like a kid with his widdle puppy.
Haha,anywhoo this was way good! (:
GOOD JOB! :D

LOVED IT (:

*tear* *sniffle* *tear*
I can't believe it's over! It has been one of the most amazing stories I have ever read in my years of being a fanfic addict =]
That epilogue was so perfect
and I'm sure if the story was continuing, Lux would be going on tour with Oli in a months time =P

Cannot wait for your new stories =D

It's been a joy to follow this story right from the start and I've loved every single bit of it =]

Omgosh! This was amazing. I read it in one sitting, which btw I do not recommend doing, because my ass hurts. But yeah, there were times when I wanted to just punch James, AND Elle's mom in the face. I'm glad things worked out between James and her in the end. And I love how cutesy things were between her and Oli in the end. Love it! :]

:( the end. its the end :(

well, i absolutely loved it so so so much
i cant wait for the new Oli + Tom ones :D