Three Cheers For Sweet Revenge - Comments

Ben Bruce (100)

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A Sea of Dead Drives Men Insane

Oh, and read :)

February 24th, 2009 at 08:44pm

Ben Bruce (100)

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ooooooo abi writes romance :)

but this is fantastic :D you've been raving about this one for ages and i can see why....i'm so proud of you! *sobs*

i really should do my art now

xx

February 24th, 2009 at 08:44pm

joonie. (100)

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This is really interesting. I don't know what else to say. It was written well. Some paragraphs were really big, maybe look into chopping them up a bit. It seems like it's going to be a really exciting story. Your chapter was really captivating at the end. I really enjoyed it.

February 19th, 2009 at 05:15am

Sweetacher (100)

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Well, this :XD. And about 500 words of the second chapter. I'm expecting to finish that sometime in April. This is a slow burner.

February 10th, 2009 at 08:33pm

tendo choi (100)

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I like it. How much have you already written?

February 10th, 2009 at 08:29pm