I really, really like this. It's a great, original idea that hasn't been overdone. Or, well, atleast to my knowledge. Haha. I'd really like to see this continue. Keep it up [:
However, you need to fix your dialogue. Smooshing it all into paragraphs makes it hard to keep up with.
But by all means, please continue.
February 11th, 2009 at 07:00pm
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However, you need to fix your dialogue. Smooshing it all into paragraphs makes it hard to keep up with.
But by all means, please continue.