Playing Russian Roulette. - Comments

Dropping by to say that this is officially my fave ETF that i've read so far!!
and that's a lot...
anyway! I totally love how it's like real chapters and no one is rushing into anything.
yes, i love it!
and anyway, i agree with the girl above me. this story deserves much much more credit!
anyway, i'm anxious for more! :D

"I pulled on the tank first, adoring how it made my boobs look, and grimaced as I tugged the shorts on." LOL Every girl secretly does that.

“Did you really just ask that? Have you seen me run, Piper?”
“Yes, I have. You run like your pants are too tight.” LOL XD

“Just drag me. I’ll follow.” I literally was like, 'awwwww!' when I read that. hehe

Seriously I dont understand why you only have this many comments and why you only have this many stars so far. I've read seriously shitty ones that have almost ten stars, which is pure shit. This is probably the best ETF story I've ever read.
For realz.
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This story is interesting.

Eeee :) I havent read it all yet (just read chapter 2) but i love it so far! i'm subscribing and reading the rest later...teehee. I love Craig Mabbitt.

My ETF fic is sorta related to this almost, you should possibly read it ;) It's called A sea of dead drives men insane. *hint hint*

great fic xxx

Awww...I loved the end! Go Piper/Juliet ! (I can't really figure out what to call her... but in a good way!) Can't wait for more...!

How could someone give you nasty criticism? You write beyond well! [:

"I looked at Ghost. He was standing beside Max’s leg, staring up at him with wide, adoring eyes." Aw. Cutest mental image. :D

“Max!” Leila jiggled around. “Maxie, Maxie!”
Max laughed and stole the toddler from Gabrielle’s arms. She planted a kiss on his cheek, and he quickly returned it. " Nothing's cuter than a hot boy holding a little kid. XD <333

I really liked this chapter. So much in it. And Gabrielle... I don't know. A part of me wants to like her but another wants Piper/Juliet to let Gabrielle know that ETF can talk about whatever and she should STILL think they're awesome.
Cause they are. xD

...Throughout the whole little conversation between Gabrielle and Piper about Max, I was like, "...I bet 20 bucks that camera's on. They should just shut up now..."
haha.

Good job, yo.
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wow. that was deep, dude. Awesome update!

That was so sad! I hope things get better for Juliet.

"I even had several people ask me out on dates and a few marriage proposals. I denied, of course, saying they would have to win my heart first." haha That's cute.

“No!” Bryan shoved Robert’s shoulder. “She thought I was hot! You’re just jealous that she didn’t look at you. Monte one, Rob zero.” XD lol

Good chapter. We learned a lot. [:

So much to say, but that was amazing.

yeah!!! You updated! Awesome! I love the whole "Butt guy" thing. I laughed so hard I fell out of my chair! Teehee...! I'm hooked now....so keep updating. :)

There definitely wasn't that much typos in this one. Hell, if there really was that many, I didn't even notice them, but that doesn't happen often. lol
I... don't know what to make of the relationship with Gabrielle. It's still up in the air with me. I kind of think that they'll be mutal friends. I think things will always be tense so they'll never be like best friends, but then again, I don't really want them to be best friends. I definitely think that there's gonna be a few intense moments shared between the two.
And I don't want her to fall for Craig. Simple as that. XD

haha I thought I was going to die from laughter when Bryan said I'm a butt guy. Anyway the story is beyond amazing so far and I look foward to more =)

I loved this chapter. I can see your characters starting to grow. I see perks and flaws in all of them, something you know i love to read about. :cute:
It left me wanting more.

I love this story! Your writing has it's own personalized style, so the characters do too! I love how you've incorporated so many different aspects of their lives into the story...and i can't wait to see what's next! :)

I loved the update.
I think that as the story goes on the characters personality will develope more. I wouldn't worry too much about it.

I really like this story so far. It's realistic. I love how the chapters aren't three lines long, too. XD
As for the typos, well, yes, they were in there, but they weren't extremely bad as to not get your point across. So kudos for that. haha.
And about your concern with the characters' personalities... Don't worry about it too much. It's only the second chapter, it doesn't matter how long they are, you can't expect us readers to know their personalities like the back of our hands just yet. Give it time. As an author, it's your job to not only tell the story and etc., but show what the characters are like gradually. So yeah, it's obviously too early in the story for us to get a perfect idea of what everybody's like.
I say good job.
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oh, this is really good.
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I didn't klnow this was out yet, and I'm so glad you told me about it. :brightside:
I love how Juliet is almost torn between her feelings with Ronnie. Her angry problems sound like they're going to play some sort of the plot, too.
You used Boxers! :yah
Stefan and Devin are definitely hot.
Holly, I love your amazing writing skills.

moreeeee? Its really good. with a pretty original plotline