December 5th, 2009 at 09:45pm
Hmmm....(and I don't mean that badly) Quite a few spelling and grammar mishtakies yesh...<---Paradoxie. I like it that she is actually his wife. ^_^ I'm not one for one shots, I always feel they have to carry on the poor things. They look lonely without their sister chapters. But besides all that, I liked it and hope your teacher did too.
Cheerio
I want to read this but i cant due to the fond.
Thanks : )