Chapter 20: Dawn needs to seriously get over Jason, and go for Connor! He's been nothing but sweet to her since they first met and Jason seems kinda shallow.
CONNOR!!! yay!! Have to say that her Mum is starting to sound more and more like the evil stepmother every chapter. and if I had a best friend like Missy, I think I'd be set for life.
I LOOVVVEEE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Missy is such a good friend! I love this Cinderella version of yours! It's so addicting. And ugh, her mother is starting to piss me off. Why can't Dawn just move out or something? She seems so unhappy.
LOL her best friend is awesome!!! And Connor is also there too and that will be one hell of a night!!! I could just throttle Rose there, her and her snotty attitude!!!! I hope something happens to her that embarrass her so bad that she'll think twice about messing with her little sister. And could Sky to like that to her little sister, what kind of brother is he?! I also hope he gets what he deserve too. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!!!
Hi I love your story and the plot is so AWESOME!!!! When I first read about Rose, I instantly hated her and hope she gets what she deserves. She is really ANNOYING!!!!!I can't wait for the next update, hope it'll be SOON!!!!
Dun Dun Duunnn and so it begins. Cant wait for the next update and to know her escape!! ((if there is one)) missy is such a good friend and im glad that dawn stood up to rose for her. Rose seriously needs taken down a few notches >=[
omg this is getting super good finally dawn fights back but ugh, fucking rose man. I just want stabbed her little evil eyes out. :D :D :D :D :D she's 18, she should just walk out that house. her parents are freaking useless.
omg.! ughh i really REALLY dnt liike Rose xD & ytf was Jason possibly gunna ask Dawn out if he's goin to the balls with Rose?? i sense drama. haha & i love Conner.!!!! hahaha he's just so adorable ;D lolz update fast.!!! haha i read about the balls already haha