The Reluctant Cinderella - Comments

Connor sounds alooooot better than Jason.

Chapter 20: Dawn needs to seriously get over Jason, and go for Connor! He's been nothing but sweet to her since they first met and Jason seems kinda shallow.

oh and please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CONNOR!!! yay!! Have to say that her Mum is starting to sound more and more like the evil stepmother every chapter. and if I had a best friend like Missy, I think I'd be set for life.

I love this story.
Rose plays an evil sister well...maybe too well -eye twitch-
I want to punch her every time I see her name pop up XD
Amazing.

Sky is such a bleep.
D:<
God. Douche bag.

I LOOVVVEEE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
Missy is such a good friend! I love this Cinderella version of yours! It's so addicting.
And ugh, her mother is starting to piss me off.
Why can't Dawn just move out or something? She seems so unhappy.

LOL her best friend is awesome!!! And Connor is also there too and that will be one hell of a night!!! I could just throttle Rose there, her and her snotty attitude!!!! I hope something happens to her that embarrass her so bad that she'll think twice about messing with her little sister. And could Sky to like that to her little sister, what kind of brother is he?! I also hope he gets what he deserve too. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!!!

Dawn's family is so mean. They deserve to be evaporated or something like that.
I picture Dawn looking like Selena Gomez. Perfect for the role.

Hey, i just want to say that I really like your story :)
It's well written and the plot is interesting!
So...yeah :)
keep it up!

Dawn's mother is such a bitch!!!

Hi I love your story and the plot is so AWESOME!!!! When I first read about Rose, I instantly hated her and hope she gets what she deserves. She is really ANNOYING!!!!!I can't wait for the next update, hope it'll be SOON!!!!

dig the new layout :D

update soon!

Dun Dun Duunnn and so it begins. Cant wait for the next update and to know her escape!! ((if there is one)) missy is such a good friend and im glad that dawn stood up to rose for her. Rose seriously needs taken down a few notches >=[

*chants* DEATH TO ROSE! DEATH TO ROSE! lol anyway.. please update soon!!!!!!!!

UPDATE QUICKER
LIKE RIGHT NOW PLEASE

omg this is getting super good
finally dawn fights back
but ugh, fucking rose man. I just want stabbed her little evil eyes out.
:D :D :D :D :D she's 18, she should just walk out that house. her parents are freaking useless.

It would be really good if she and Missy could, like, record Rose being mean, and then show it to her parents, who really are pathetic excuses.

ohhh... I smell Drama!!! lol please keep writting!!!! Well done on the time between chapters btw. and the quality too. lol

omg.! ughh i really REALLY dnt liike Rose xD
& ytf was Jason possibly gunna ask Dawn out
if he's goin to the balls with Rose??
i sense drama. haha &
i love Conner.!!!! hahaha he's just so adorable ;D lolz
update fast.!!! haha i read about the balls already haha