Thanks for entering! Gorgeous writing, I'll give you that! I love the title, and bonus points for mentioning ivy. I like the repetition of the 'lost in a forest' line. One criticism; it was a little long. If you were to revise it, perhaps attempt to condense your writing a little. But it flowed really well, and your range of vocabulary is bewitching.
Gorgeous writing, I'll give you that!
I love the title, and bonus points for mentioning ivy.
I like the repetition of the 'lost in a forest' line.
One criticism; it was a little long.
If you were to revise it, perhaps attempt to condense your writing a little.
But it flowed really well, and your range of vocabulary is bewitching.