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just found this and it was amazing :D

Well, you ended it. lol. I wish you didn't have to, but I guess that's just the way it goes.
I liked it, though!! I was so glad that it was Brendon who adopted her. Sneaky, sneaky! :P
And no worries. It's totally understandable. If you're not feeling inspired to work on something, it's silly to force yourself to continue, when you're not getting anything out of it. Good for you for seeing it through all the way, though. So many people would have just left it without finishing and not even bothered. Thanks for giving us an ending..and a good one at that!!!! :)

Renjilover13:

Well at least you didn't kill of of 'em off

I love this comment!

Awww i love it!
There better be a sequal, i love it!

I totally understand how you feel about your story! I've felt that way many, many times! I'm glad you at least wrapped it up. I thought it was really cute. It was so adorable that Brendon adopted Audrey. I had a feeling that he was going to do that. I was surprised that he proposed though, but they are really cute together. I think they'll make a cute little family. Loved the story and look forward to reading more of your stuff :)

I actually really liked the ending. Maybe I'm just a sucker for a happy ending, but...
I just thought that it was really sweet, what he did for her. <333
I'm sad that this is over, now. =)
This story was brilliant.

Well at least you didn't kill of of 'em off

yeah, it was a lil rushed,,, but it was still good :D

thats so sad... they'll figure something out!!

not good!!

Oh drama!! Can't wait until next update!(:

Oh no! That's so sad! Just so much for Audrey and Savannah to deal with. I hope that Savannah can fight to adopt Audrey. I hope she's not in Foster Care for too long! I'm so glad that Brendon is there for them too. Savannah and Brendon are so cute! More soon, please?

Loved the new update!! :)
But...only three more chapters?!! I'm really disappointed about that. I expected this story to be lot longer than that. It's really too bad that most authors won't write fuller stories these days. We're really missing out on reading them.

Oh no.
That's so horrible. =/
Please update soon?

I hope that Audrey and Savannah can make it through this! Such are hard time. I really feel for both of them. More soon! :)

Awh. :/ That was sad.
Brendon's such a sweetheart,

Ohh, that was really sad. x(
More soon?

awww, that's so sad...
funerals are always so tough
hopefully things will just get better :D

that's so sad!
now her mom died too?
AHHH!!!! but now I bet Audrey is gonna live w/ Savannah

I really like this story.
Update soon? :]