It's Not All About You, Luke - Comments

Thanks :)
Yeah, i went through and fixed most of it up, all that is left is a couple of lowercase I's >.>
But just so you know; I'm Australian - We spell words a little different to American spelling.

THAT WAS AN AWSUM STORY!!!!!!!!
think ya could spell check it though

This is A good story. I really like it. Look foward to reading more :]

Awww, so sweet!
Do you actually have a point to the story now? :P
WRITE A PLOTLINE!
It makes it so much less dirty if you already know where you're headed.
"I have something to show you..." :O

its pretty cool!! i'm suspicious of this todd dude though...

Dammit, Jess!! And it was going so well! As if you'd run out of ideas! :P
Well, obviously she should get with Todd, and obviously he should get hurt somehow.
Maybe you should involve some more of her school life; you know, because at the start she was talking about how she isn't accepted and all that?
And maybe talk about why her mother suddenly had a change of heart.
Keep writing, Jess!

YAYS, YOU QUOTED THE LIVING END!

Now...down to business

I reckon Anthony could be already seeing someone

uhh... err I actually have no clue bub... DONTEATME!!! :shock: