that story was great! i loved the idea! i loved the alterations between memories and reality! that was one of the best by far! i laughed, i cried... almost =P... fantastic! <3
dudee seriously i'm close to tears! thats so sad but yet absolutely amazing. you're an exelent writer. yes yes it didn't have to be porn or anything. i lyke how you incoorperated the flashbacks and song lyrics in. *applauds* and many kudos!
that was beyond adorable. you're an awesome written! the flashbacks were beautifully written and fit in perfectly! and the way you put the song lyrics in was amazing. i loved it.
Okay, so I read a story where people die, and I don't cry. I read this, and I tear up. I mean, what the hell? You're so effing awesome. Your one shots are unbelievable. xD <3
aww this was a great story! i loved it! and the pic of frank was to cute! lol this story reminded me of me and my bffl, i kissed him when we were little! lol
Firith, ive said this once ill say it again, your the only writer of hetero-sex that i will read. honestly, you write it perfectly. i am a little bit scared, but i honestly love it. you make oneshots seem so easy.
just be careful with flashbacks etc, sometimes it can get confusing, but you worked it perfectly.
one question - will you be so kind as to write one for me? :tehe: -begs- please?
I agree with Kris it was a perfect ending. and damn you, you made me tear up agian that twice in a week way to much emotions for me! LOL I will say this I didn't want to jump off a bridge this time. It was too cute with the little flashbacks I loved those Frankie as a little kid to cute. I loved it!
You're like, a fucking whiz kid. And it didn't even have to be porn. It's that damn good.
AND IT'S NOT SAPPY or CORNY!!!
So don't go off saying that. It was almost the perfect ending to a horribly dramatic day (Thank you INO). The real perfect ending is when I go to bed... I will simply say it's your fault when he asks why I called him Frankie... :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao