Thinking of You - Comments

i loved this.....im sorta sad with how it ended but at the same time...im happy=]

Not gonna lie I liked the story until the ending. There was too much going around her and zacky that I can't believe they didn't end up together. Not even a random hook up! Haha but I don't mind that they didn't end up together just that there was so much history that absolutely nothing happened between them. Not every story can turn out the same but I really don't like that she married dan. She couldve and shouldve gotten with martin from blg and now I'm done with my essay of a critique. Good story just not dan :-)

aww good ending

no! they should be together!

I still dont like Gena and Zacky...

to be honest i didn't like this chapter
I'm not saying it to be a bitch
I'm just upset it ended that way
please don't be mad at me

oh! my! god! kaleb!? more!

I cant believe Zacky and Gena got married...

i still love this

ah! i love it! oh my god! more more more more more!

Zack is such a jerk!

hey! oh m fucking god! i love this story! moooooooooore!

Chapter 15: Can I kill Zacky for being a shitty friend, liar, and an asshole?

i knew it would happen
i knew he would take gena back
and i knew he was going to put the blame on her again
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
zacky is such an ass

He's an ass.

aw poor Rachel :(
what is Zacky thinking??!!
loved it!

eeew!
zacky took that nasty skank back?!
blech!

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"I told you time and time again that I didn't like the way you were around Zacky, and then he gets all cute at you and you lap it up. What am I going to do to make you realize that it just pisses me off?" By now he had me pushed into the corner of the kitchen and I had a flashback of all the times Kaleb did the same thing. To say I was petrified would be an understatement.

Awhhh...but Dan ain't nothing more then a cuddly, cute little teddy bear!!! Damn, I'd just never be able to imagine him meaning harm to anyone...actually, can't even imagine him looking genuinely angry!
But: there's always a first! Ans Zack is soooo getting in her pants soon!

great story...cant wait for you to start writing again!

Sweet story.