Ah you don't update a lot, what am I supposed to do in my boring life?! It's too cold to ride horses and I want to read more! Patience is a virtue I'll never get.
It's really good but maybe you should SpellCheck it first because there are a few spelling and punctuation mistakes. Overall a great story and I can't wait to read more!
I love the story, though it could flow together a bit more. There was a point where I went from one paragraph to another and was confused as they seemed to be talking about two different things. Grammar and spelling could be improved upon as well, but all in all, a very good story! I am really glad you updated though. I almost forgot about this story it had been so long!
i really enjoyed this chapter as well it was thrilling and each chapter keeps letting out more and more of the story please update soon it drives me insane when there are cliffhangers ahah i love it please continue :DDDDD