Slaves Don't Know How To Fight Back, Guess I'm an Exception - Comments

love the update :D

...Exams are tight, I didn't think, I am sorry! I would love to help, so when my schedule clears I will definitely come back and help out if you still need it.

I volunteer to edit!! Please, I will! I will talk to you about it tomorrow, cause I love this, and I'd be willing to help. :}

love this so far :D

ekk!! thank you for updating!! (:

Wonder how he's going to react!!!^.^Rain is awesome, that bird lady is creepy.

Honey, I loved helping you, and would love to be your editor!!!! And I love this story!!!! I can't wait til the next update!

I like this so far...

more please this is awesome, i first started reading and then had to pee but i did not want to stop reading, that was fun XD. MORE PLEASE~!

YES!!!!! NEW CHAPTER!!!!! I have re-read them multiple times cuz I love your story!!!!! And I love this chapter, as I do all the others!!!! Can't wait for more!!!!

ITS BEEN FOREVER!!!! I like Jinx:) Update as soon as you can please

God i hate when people report stories! so your grammars not perfect - whos is? the story is still great and i hope you update one day... i'm dying for her to meet the vampire prince and show him whos boss LoL. :D

update soon. love it

I love it!!!! It is sad, hilarious, and so many things combined!!!!! I can't wait for more!!!! ^.^

-Panda/Muffin/Kelso

To start I'd like to say that I like the idea and your main character is interesting. I've only read the first chapter, but I have to agree with The Wicked. There are a lot of spelling errors, well now it's more like typo's because you have correctly spelled words that aren't what you meant. For example:
"Father had given me a task to go gather food as decritly as I could..." the word decritly, I think you meant discreetly. Which means "without attracting attention" where decritly isn't a word, at least not in my dictionary.
"The year is 2030 and the world has gone to hell letterly." the word letterly, I believe you meant literally.
At one point it's a bit awkward.

"I grabbed my bow and cocked an arrow and shoot hitting a werewolf in the neck." Perhaps putting it like this would create a better flow.

I grabbed my bow, cocked an arrow, and shot - hitting a werewolf in the neck.

Just an opinion though. I encourage you to re-read this. Also, it's a lot of telling instead of showing. BUT!! I like the end. It makes me want to know what happens next. XD

i really like this story. alot better than most. it makes totally sense to me. I hope you update soon. LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't understand the misspellings when mibba has spell check :/
Despite that, I like this story much better than all those other slave stories. It's more unique, I think.

u must write more you must XD

OMG! I'm lovin this story! Make sure to post more soon please!

I love the idea of this story and the characters!!! Can't wait for another update!!!