Red. - Comments

Rian Dawson (100)

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=( Wow. I feel really bad for that guy. Lol.

That was really well written.

Good luck in the contest (not like you need it. Lol).

March 2nd, 2009 at 12:29am

nevershoutnever (100)

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Bit depressing but really well written.
Loved it muchly.

February 24th, 2009 at 04:55pm

LullabyeLaura (100)

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It was sad and poetic. It didn't screw around with names or anything else unimportant. I really liked it.

February 17th, 2009 at 09:21pm

once more.radio nerd (100)

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it was so sad. :(

I love your writing I swear I am jealous. :(

February 16th, 2009 at 03:54pm

GalaxyDefend3r (100)

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As sad as the ending was it was really good.

i could picture everthing you were talking about and it keep me interested the whole way through. i just had to know how it was going to end!!

February 16th, 2009 at 04:25am

alexandra. (100)

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I really liked this.
It was short, but it got right to the point instead of drabbling nonsense that wasn't entirely useful.
You're a talented writer, and I could invision everything in this story. :) I thoroughly enjoyed it.

February 15th, 2009 at 08:53pm