I started reading this one after some reference you made to it in "I can not tell a lie but I kind of have to". But anywhoozers I wanted to say
1) I love how you actually are writing out the story her Dad wrote!
2) The characters were wonderful!
3) I love theatre!
4) Hmmm....I swear there was something here I was suppose to put...hmmm...about..like the story or something? OH YEAH! I remember! I wanted to say.....I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
Your story does not suck, it's amazing! I'm just sad it ended. :( Why did Jordyn take some of Kaylee's stuff? Anyway, great ending ^^ I will now go and check out your other story :D
Yayyyy Mary! You finished! Actually, I'm kind of sad about this, but I guess I'll live. I suppose I'll just have to go and read your other story now. I've loved this one, but I think you ended it at just the right place. Congratulations on writing such a fabulous story! :D :D :D
i can't believe it's over. :) It's great great story!! I love it soo much. And it totally does NOT suck. I love it! And I can't wait for your other story to get more chapters. :)) And I love the HP references. :)
You are AMAZING for finishing such a great and long story as this! 76 chapters. My goodness. Crazyy girl, but you've set an awesome example and hope for other writers! (:
It's over *cries* I'll miss this story so freaking bad I swear if you just posted random chapters i'd read them just because Aww farewell young grasshppper story I'll miss reading all of Jordyn and Kaylee's cray pranks and ideas I shall stop now before i go all sentimal and start talking about how "you remeber in the beggining and..." I don't think you wanna read that :)
Love the recent chapters, except for one thing.. it was action to filler.. if it was action to filler/action, that would have made it just right.. but overall, it was good. (: Write the next one soon!
It's a pretty good story. The beginning was a little laggy because they had to explain some things. And some aspects of the story were a little unreal but that's why they call it fiction.
*Woot Woot* And that firetruck type sound that everybody knows how to make :D Hehehehe I'm acting insane Thier together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awww one chapter left :( NOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooOooooooooooOoOOooooOOooOooOoooOOoooO!!!!!!!
1) I love how you actually are writing out the story her Dad wrote!
2) The characters were wonderful!
3) I love theatre!
4) Hmmm....I swear there was something here I was suppose to put...hmmm...about..like the story or something? OH YEAH! I remember! I wanted to say.....I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!