I love how you managed to catch Gerard's sleepiness and Mikey's brotherly instincts. Frank's character was really good too. Do you know what Billie Joe said about a story called "My Adventure With Green Day by Laurie L" ? He said it was kind of like parodies of themselves.
That's the kind of spirit that came through with this. Especially with Frank. I wish you'd given Ray some more lines though.
Frank can be sooooo hyper sometimes xD