hello darling. I'm finally getting to the comments. I loev the imagery in this piece. I truly enjoyed readin the story. It captivated me and kept me interested. It felt like a kid was narrating, but it didn't lose it's effectiveness and personality. you have a great writing style. and no it isn't an essay, its less than i thought i'd write, but i kinda summed it up. it was shamwowishly amazing!
April 2nd, 2009 at 11:14pm
