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Ok, Let's try this one more time... haha thanks for the tip! Silly me, never reading things carefully. First of all i do like reading things that appeal to the eye with the layout! And i really like this layout. I think it suits the oneshot perfectly! Secondly your writing style allows the readers to get so emotionally connected with it! I really did enoy this and hope you keep up your writing because you have some true talent! Sorry for commenting like three times!

So comment swap gave me this oneshot again so im just gonna tell you once again! This was really interesting and i felt very emotionally connected to it! It was great! :)

This is so good!! you put so much emotion into it and any reader cant help but feel emotionally involved in it! This is really good and enjoyed every minute of it! :)

Gah! Absolutely amazing! I honestly thought that Ryan was going to overdose on pills or that Brendon wouldn't have came back. But I'm glad neither of those things happened!

Beautiful.
:O
Adorable.
:3
Sweet.
:)
Love.
<3

That was just so beautiul and real. I absolutely love it.
='D

So.
I reread.
And I cried.

I've had my share of angst and heartache with the stories I've been reading this week, but I couldn't stop. It's too beautiful to resist, and it hurts but that's the way it its.

It would be wrong of me not to comment such a perfect piece of work.
This is inspiring, seriously. It truely is.
I want to hug this piece of work because it's so great!
@ A @
Wow. Just... Wow.
<3

This was so good, and beautiful too.

It kind of reminds me of those days where someone is waiting for their best friend or lover to call when they said they would, but they just sit, and there's no call. Kind of like that.

The story was so personal, and I felt like I was watching it, or even experiencing it. It was a really good read (like all of the stories I've read by you). I loved it.

A favorite, of course. :cute:

That was so beautiful.

Perfect song choice, too.

The ending was absolutely gorgeous, perfect. I could picture it in my head so clearly.

The style in which you wrote it was so simple, and it suited the story very well. The repetition at the start of "Ryan's staring at the phone" drew me in straight away.

This is one of my favourite one-shots :cute:

Drrrruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu xDD
I kinda hate you right now. Really. I clicked this out of curiosity from your sig, and then I was like 'ooh' at the summary and layout.

I didn't expect that.

I loved the tone you wrote it in, with such PRECISE pacing, it was almost unbelievable. It flowed SO WELL in my head, and it was so beautiful to read aloud. I don't wanna quote since I'll put on too many lines I liked. There was just something about this that was EFFECTIVE. I'm not sure what. Maybe it's everything.

Probably, by far, the BEST one-shot I've ever read in this SIMPLISTIC, MINIMALIST style of writing. Ever. This is soooo bookmarked.

Shitfuckdamn. I keep rereading it. I haven't been really WOWED by anything on Mibba recently. Maybe a select few, but most of the time, I just LIKE the stuff. But this was like... There was just a really real, surreal quality to it, the hesitation to call, the paranoia and insecurity, and the ending. I was caught by 'he's trying to dance, trying to smile' and the ending, where they just stare at each other and cry and laugh and know everything's gonna be all right.

And btw, jsyk, I've started to read your fics as original fiction, not as PATD. It works better, for me.

really nice

Beautiful.

New story.
Ryden.
Oneshot.
923 words.
Angsty.
Hope you like.

Happy [?] reading!

xoxox
-Dru