Walk The Rainbow World With Me - Comments

Brilliant. Simply brilliant. You captured the color in a way I was certainly not expecting. It was a surprise. A nice one may I say. The description was overall wonderfull and very well written.

Good job! Here is a hug for being awesome~ *hugs*

Wow!! Simply amazing... honestly im speechless....
beautifully written and all those colour really felt like they were coming to life

I think I failed kindergarten. You lost me with all your colours and names.
But wow. Just wow. It's wonderful! You're such a good author

The images in this were wonderful.

The poetry stanzas were nicely done and flowed well.

The use of second person was nice as well. A lot of authors can't pull it off even half as well.

Brava.

I love the short choppy words. I also like the details. YOu ahve an amazing writing style. It flows incredible well. THe sentence type is of great variation. I truly enjoyed reading this.

Absolutely incredible, the use of imagery, and the colors, I never thought you could describe colors in the way that you do.
Just incredible!

Oh, wow. That was incredible. That was....It was beautiful. It really spoke to me, because so often I feel the same way. Color is overlooked somehow, when it's all we really see. You painted a picture in my head with your words, and...I'm finding it difficult to figure out how to tell you exactly how much I liked this, because I feel like I'm repeating myself.

I think you should win that contest. :arms: