We Can Shine Like the Sun - Comments

Hi there :)
So I'm not usually interested in band stories, but I actually enjoyed reading yours. The comments below have already mentioned how the funny aspect is a lot more entertaining than those really deep and heavy stories, but I especially loved that line about people never having to pee in movies (I literally think about that all the time! Haha) And I also really like your characters, they way you've presented them shows how they're all different and like-able in their own ways. I didn't notice any real grammar/spelling issues, which is awesome because I can't stand those. Anyway, it looks like a really cool story you've got going here, so keep up the good work! :)

I like the way you divulge the characters and who they are through the interview- it's a realistic way for the reader to really get to know who these characters are. i also liked the way you included different real bands and things that they liked; it made them easier to relate to. i also like the humor you incorperated- it kept it light and easy to read. often stories about bands can get too heavy, and then no one has fun :P but i think that this is really well written. i especially love the way that you don't just say "he said..." "and then she said..." you use different words, which keeps the dialogue from getting repetative, which is always a good thing haha :) overall, it's a very excellent job, and wonderful writing.

An interesting and well-written story about a kick-ass Australian band (can you tell I’m a patriotic Australian :p).

Both of you write very well and your characters are well thought out and easily relatable. Your story is well laid out and easy to read and I enjoyed reading it

I really, really enjoyed reading this story! Both of you have a great way of writing. You keep the whole story really interesting, with the way you describe things. The story itself has a great plot and the idea is just really nice! :)

Starting with the layout, it's simple (something which I love), yet it has no emptiness attachment to te story. Apart from that, the story is great and so relatable! I've always wanted to be on Warped Tour so for the story I lived vicariously through the characters. So super excited that I'm going three times this year and working at the dates, too! Anyways, your writing style is amazing and you have well structured paragraphs, however I saw you mentioned that you didn't write this? As xxStrangerInMoscowxx said, I was a little confused if you stepped in at one point and wrote that (I'm only on Chapter 5). It's great regardless! :) x

I've only read one story like this and so far this one sounds pretty good. I like the voice of the characters very much. Considering I'm only at the first part. I have a question though. You say someone gave you this story? Are you continuing it or something? And if so, when does your part start? So I can know when you actually wrote it hahaha. Or is it done and I'm just slow af? It's nice though. I might actually go to Warped Tour this summer. Woo.

HAHAHAHA! Le sigh..... I love Warped Tour stories and this one is definitely no exception!!!! I'm only about a third of the way through but this story is really good so far!!! And I really like your layout. You have a nice writing style :) And I really like how well developed the characters are.

askdfjhasbanvpuidksfha jack<3 I reallly love this story, even though I'm only on chapter one. I love Jack so much, he's so adorable. I really like how you give us so much information about the girls& the bands. I can't wait to keep reading c:

I...love SarahhhhRawrrr because her comments are cool :)
And I also love this story

BECAUSE I WRITE HALF OF IT MWAHAHAHAHAHAH :)

you guys...love titanic
i...love this story

poor Caleb. Vara was a little harsh with her last comment
and Mr. Gaskarth should go die in this story!
lovee it

this will forever and always be one of my favorite stories!
I absolutely lovee it

So I just finished part seven, and I must say, clicky tops are WAY better. My friend went to a college fair and found the most bounciest clicky top pen... with the initials STI on it. Clicky tops own. :D

I do beleive we are awesome Kayla.

Also, the girl who's mibba name is ForeverTheSickestMe! has a cool signiture.
I do like the colours :)

please update this story.
i likey it.
hehe

EW, SHE'S BLOND!

she should fer deff date Caleb..
and Holly and Kyle need to date

she should fer deff date Caleb..
and Holly and Kyle need to date

she should fer deff date Caleb..
and Holly and Kyle need to date

more people shoud be commenting this story (:
i realy likee thiss.
update soon!