Handsome Is As Handsome Does - Comments

Comment swap has brought me here! I like the idea, a bit cliche, but otherwise well written overall. The only thing I can suggest is to go back to earlier chapters and take out all the stresses you've put on words. It's a major turn-off. It's just, you don't need to stress things because the reader can pick it up, you know? An occasional italicized word is alright, but the first chapters have so many different types of emphasis that I had no idea where you were going with it.

I really like the idea of this. I was brought here by comment swap. I'm not usually into these types of stories, but this one was a lot better. I like the way you describe everything that's happening. I hate having to imagine everything that's going on in the story with very little detail given to me, and this is the exact opposite. I'm given all the words and it paints a vivid picture.

Comment swap brought me to this story, and i must say i like it :D i like the cuteness in the beginning with the little boy, and the tittle is really clever. I also like the colors in your layout its calming :P lol update soooooon :)

Just found this story and I find it quite interesting! and wait, what was that? Tristan caring? oÔ ;)

Eep! More please! I love where this is going :)
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Brittney is such a bitch.
Yeah, I really don't like her >.<
More soon hun!
xx =)

Thank you guys! I'm glad you like my story :) I should be updating it tomorrow, but Thursday at the latest as exams and work are very hectic at the moment :)

I love this to bits! It's awesome! Amazing plot by the way...
Update soon hun!
xx =)

I really really really like this! I definitely want to read more. I very much dislike Tristan and Britney (they make me mad!Urgh...). I can't wait to see what you do with this story, there are so many possibilties! Okay well continue writing this!