Mental Fiction Follows Me - Comments

thank you. ill update it in a few days. :)

I just read what you have written so far and this is one of the most creative stories I have read. It is pure genius!!

i really think that i just fell in love with this so PLEASE keep on writing pluuueesssuuh

noooooooooooooooooooooooo dont finish there i wanna read more please write more i love this story i love all your stories i'll be bored to deeath without them *sobs*

six: I finally came back from my extremely long absent and I'm still in effing love with this. The strangest think we can think of to go in the story...lets see, Zacky acting lustful around Whisper, Liar to appear in the next chapter, Whisper thinking of a tattoo *whatever you want* on her left shoulder and it appearing there, and a look at what's going on the other side while she's been in upside-down land. Can't wait to read the next chapter whenever you get the chance to write it. By the way; glad to hear that your out of the hospital and doing fine.

i cannot for the life of me, figure out what she really is!
she totally should have stayed and gotten some syn loves, lol
i really like this!
*subscribes*

i just found this story and am in love with it! man oh man is it creative. i'm so lost as to what she is... or isnt... but i can tell she's above the rest of them in terms of heirarchy. i think she should have had a go with syn haha. but maybe she's reserved for zacky lol. she can't hate him forever.

I've got no clue what the heck she is, but good chapter my dearest Twinsie! More soon? :)

five: Guessing that she's a body switcher or something like that. *cause that did kind of happen in the first chapter; I think.* Anyways, the story; love being addicted to it more and more. Wondering what will happpen next?

umm she's a type of creature who can take on other's powers? idk lol you never told me this!

DUDE! Seriously loving this story-I love "trippy" shit that reminds me of acid trips =D Can't wait to read more and find out what Whisper actually is...

four: Instantly loving this right now. Might even knock down Brompton Cocktail Blend from the number one spot of my favorites listing *check signature to understand*. Loving the descriptions of the her house more; wish I could have a kitchen big enough that I had to hire personal chefs and an entertainment room as huge as that. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

three: Still liking this. I would actually love seeing a sky like that. Anyways, hating the rollercoaster part of this chapter; seeing as I've always hated them. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Can I be Liar? Seeing as I lie every other day.

two: Liking this. Wondering if, this is not until the ending chapters, she's is going to wake up, be in a hospital, and realize that everything after her falling and before her waking up was a dream? Reading the next chapter now.

intro/one: Sounds interesting. Wondering who the girl was in the mirror? What's going to happen next? Can't wait to find out.

loved it as always, chica!

This is sikk. Lol. The confusion of the character gets you thinking alot. I like it.

=D.

I love this story, its very different than anything else that I have read. And that's a good thing =]
There are only so many times that I can read the same old story line in different stories lol
Well I talked to Angie *points above* And she said that I would make a great Deceit.
So may I please be the character of Deceit?
Pleeeeeeease?
*gives you cookie*
I can't wait for more!

well duh...this story is amazing and i want you to keep writing...RIGHT NOW! and i'm already a girl so um...yeah. Envy that bitch.