Great update! At first I was confused when it suddenly switched from the man in the woods to Sean that was carrying her, but then you explained it. Please update again soon.
My feet hurt O_e Anyways, haha, the chapter was reeeeeeeeeeally good. I wonder if i snore when i sleep...-__- Oh ja, Jake better get his butt in that forest before pyscho bella finds out he gots an imprint and attacks her.... O__O That won't be good. By the way, when does this one take place? Is it after Eddy's and Bella's honeymoon? Or they havent got back yet?
:( I wanna be an imprint. *turns around and mumbles to herself*
hehehehehehehe Sean HIT him. OH man that was good. I so wish I could have actually seen that. To see this asshole get his head beat in...He should know better now than to come back, but he's probably pretty thick headed and stupid so he'll do it. And THEN Jake can beat him up....Oh now that would be good. Anyways. I commented. So you can update now?
OMG What the hell is he doing there? and how the f would anyone confuse the most sexy man on earth for Sean? Or anyone else for that matter. hehe. I hope Jake doesn't phase...that'd be bad...like uber bad. And Lillie and Sean need to get back NOOOOW.
Who just asked to see Lillie??? And why the hell would they be so nervous? Unless it's Jake?...It can't be like Quil or Embry. They'd just waltz right in and be like, LILLLLIE. haha ok maybe not with the way she is right now but....It can't be Kait's brother becuase she would have said something right? Unless Sean was blocking her view...but maybe she'd recognize the voice?
Ok. I'm doing talking to myself in this comment. ;D
MORE SOOOOOOON. I wanna know who it is and why Lillie is being so.....idk....about it.
Dancing in the rain? oh my god. why can't i meet a guy like that?
i love dancing and the rain. so kissing a guy i'm dancing with in the rain DEAR LORD WHY CAN'T THAT HAPPEN?!?!?!
but seriously amazing chapter. i can't wiat to read more!
this means you have to update tomorrow. i will if you will. that means more Jace since i'm the one who created him. i can certainly write a chapter with him in it!
but seriously i loved this chapter. it's one of my favorites. xD