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  • Lady Shadows

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    Love the update.
    June 11th, 2009 at 07:49pm
  • finallymoving.

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    Aww this was a cute update =]
    More soon!
    June 11th, 2009 at 07:29am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    love it
    June 11th, 2009 at 07:03am
  • chaz

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    matt getting jealous over bri hahahaha lmao poor guy too late for him and good job kat for pushing him away lol so far soo good the story is still going good....
    June 4th, 2009 at 09:17pm
  • finallymoving.

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    Matt should feel more guilty!
    Haha don't worry about summer school, I had to go last summer and now this summer I have a tutor for Alegebra 2 because I failed Algebra 1 two years ago...
    More soon =]
    June 4th, 2009 at 05:57am
  • Lady Shadows

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    Matt cant tell Brian.
    She has to tell Brian.
    Love the update!
    June 4th, 2009 at 02:13am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    great chapter!
    June 4th, 2009 at 01:22am
  • chaz

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    I agree with bloodravyn it was rushed but cont on so far not bad.. I think she should tell brian later you need to do matt pov to see what he is thinking to and then go from there.. But so far the plot sounds good still I think you have alot more story thoughts don't you.......
    May 31st, 2009 at 06:38am
  • Lady Shadows

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    Ohh.. poor Brian is sick.
    She warned them.
    May 31st, 2009 at 04:02am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    I think Brian should eventually find out what happened...
    May 31st, 2009 at 12:29am
  • finallymoving.

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    AJDWriter:
    I don't think things were rushed, but I don't think they should go right into a secret relationship. They both need time to think about what happened. Keep the chapters you have and go on from there. Kat would most likely end up feeling guilty and cling onto Brian more, which would cause Matt to become frustrated and try getting her from his best friend. I think you're doing a fine job with the story as is.
    ;D
    I think what she said makes a lot of sense.
    Let Kat and Matt feel guilty for a while. Let her cling to Brian and spend more time with him. Kat and Matt should also probably have a serious talk soon, maybe in the next chapter or the one after that.
    =]
    May 31st, 2009 at 12:17am
  • AJDWriter

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    I don't think things were rushed, but I don't think they should go right into a secret relationship. They both need time to think about what happened. Keep the chapters you have and go on from there. Kat would most likely end up feeling guilty and cling onto Brian more, which would cause Matt to become frustrated and try getting her from his best friend. I think you're doing a fine job with the story as is.
    ;D
    May 30th, 2009 at 07:05pm
  • Lady Shadows

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    I do not think that you should do a re-write.
    I dont think you rushed things with Kat and Matt.
    I think from here on out.. they should sneek around with each other.
    ^_^
    May 30th, 2009 at 05:49am
  • bloodravyn

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    honestly, i do think it was a bit rushed
    and maybe a few explanatorial chapters would work!
    May 30th, 2009 at 03:51am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Well I think obviously they're both attracted to each other and have been for awhile so maybe you can keep what happened at the studio, kind of like a caught in the moment kind of thing but afterwards instead of them having a secret relationship, they both freak out about what happened. Then you can continue the story from things being awkward with each other and around their friends and her mom and stuff and then go from there. That way it doesnt seem like they both forgot about their current relationships with other people. Hope that helps! :)
    May 29th, 2009 at 10:58pm
  • lipsofdeceita7x3

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    hmmmm maybe you could make it into either kat's or matt's dream or something?...idk that's all i've got =/
    May 29th, 2009 at 09:56pm
  • ljxlovesxa7x

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    This is a brilliant story you are a great writer :) I want her to stay with brian and i think matt should realise that its too late to be with her, can't wait for the next update xljx
    May 27th, 2009 at 05:31pm
  • bloodravyn

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    oh, snap!
    May 23rd, 2009 at 04:08am
  • Shadowsgirl

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    awsome update!
    :)
    more!please
    May 22nd, 2009 at 02:57pm
  • chaz

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    Damn it was about time matt and kat jeezzzzzz what a lucky girl lol the story is kickass next chapter can't wait!!!! :}
    May 22nd, 2009 at 07:41am