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  • sKwaird

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    This is really good. I like it.
    March 22nd, 2009 at 03:35am
  • Plagued.

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    I like this, Elms. I like that it's in Mikey's point of view and not Frank or Gerard's. I also like that the first line is in the "short description" for the chapter, and that the first line of the next chapter is the last line in the authors note. It's different. Good job.
    March 16th, 2009 at 05:26am
  • Devihla

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    Okay, my guess is that Gerard's a nutcase who thinks he's a vampire, and therefore he needs to live on cemetery, 'cause that's what vampires do....... :P
    March 6th, 2009 at 03:50pm
  • ghost writer

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    I am liking this. Looking forward to reading some more :cute:
    March 6th, 2009 at 11:53am
  • DeadEnd

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    Oui! He's with Jakobee isn't he?
    March 6th, 2009 at 07:31am
  • Jackles-67

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    Huh... well if he's not out for coffee.... than... he's in some white padded room with a straight jacket on screaming, "I want my fucking coffee!" *giggles*

    No, really I don't know where he is... but I do hope he yells for coffee. .... Now I want coffee....

    *giggles and goes to get coffee, than remembers I didn't give you a hug. So gives you ten hugs for forgetting*
    March 6th, 2009 at 06:34am
  • Alice Verney

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    go boys and i say some asylum thingy
    March 6th, 2009 at 04:28am
  • Tommy Joe Ratliff

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    *ponders*
    It's really obvious isn't it?
    I have no effing clue.
    Update:]
    <666
    March 6th, 2009 at 12:16am
  • zero seriousness

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    thanks for the comments guys
    i just...
    UPDATED!
    chapter three is posted
    March 5th, 2009 at 10:06pm
  • Jackles-67

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    Found it and I think I have the answer as to where Gee is....
    Out for coffee! Am I right? lol jkjk

    I really like it and can't wait for more.
    *hugs*
    February 27th, 2009 at 02:21am
  • DeadEnd

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    Ooooh! I really like this Elm!!!! Update, please?
    February 26th, 2009 at 07:09pm
  • sKwaird

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    I like this. It's different, in a good way.
    Oh, and you may want to change the HTML code in the A/N or ch. 2 to BBC.
    February 26th, 2009 at 03:10am
  • Tommy Joe Ratliff

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    GOD DAMNIT
    you just had to stop there, didn't you?
    is Gerard some where in the cemetery????
    I wanna know.
    Soon.
    You better update!
    <666
    February 26th, 2009 at 02:56am
  • Alice Verney

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    cute update
    February 26th, 2009 at 01:45am
  • zero seriousness

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    thanks for the comments guys
    i just...
    UPDATED!
    chapter two is posted
    February 26th, 2009 at 01:38am
  • Simply.Vintage

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    Another Verrry Good one!!!
    Love it!! Please Continue!!

    .....But DONT forget about your other one >.< ♥
    February 24th, 2009 at 05:03pm
  • GiveMeTherapy

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    sounds awesome so far!
    -subscribes-
    February 24th, 2009 at 03:41am
  • Tommy Joe Ratliff

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    Poor Mikey.
    I want to know what the fuck S.O.T.H is.
    I like it though, it intriuges me greatly and I want to know more.
    continue please.
    <666
    February 24th, 2009 at 03:19am
  • Devihla

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    I am so confused...
    And I fucking love it! :D
    February 23rd, 2009 at 02:54pm
  • paradise.

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    oh,
    the suspense.

    ;)

    nice.
    February 23rd, 2009 at 06:25am
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