This story is... amazing, to say the least. I'd appreciate if you continued because I stayed up until five in the morning reading this and I'll only get about an hour of sleep. But, hey, it was worth it! Thanks so much for the entertainment!
It's great to see Mac bend the rules for his daughter and Don but is it all going to work out in a fairytale happy ending? I don't know... It's sad this story is coming to an end but at the same time I'm glad to see what happens to the characters.
Okay, so I just found this story, and I have to say I absolutely love it! It is fantastic! I literally just spent the last hour to hour and a half sitting here reading the whole thing!
I love the relationship between Mac and Morgan. It's great to see them from the beginning, learning about each other, and then become closer and closer. And, seeing Mac immediately become a protective father was great.
And, then there's the Morgan/Don relationship, which I love, too! So much has happened between them, from seeing them kind of crushing on each other to taking their relationship to the next level. It's all amazing! And, now that Mac has finally found out about them, I can't wait to see what happens with that and if Morgan can convince him that they really do love each other and their age difference isn't that big of a deal.
And, then there's the different storylines throughout the story. First, with the bombing. I have to say, mibba decided to stop working right after the chapter where the bomb went off, and it wouldn't let me read the next chapter right away, and I started freaking out. That is how good your writing and your supsense is!
Plus, her getting kidnapped! That was intense for everyone involved. And, to top it all of with the SOEC Kit results. I loved it!
I know I found this story kind of late, and you're finishing it up, but I can't wait for the last few chapters!
And, I'm sorry for this extremely long comment, but I figured you deserved a long one since I'm pretty much commenting on the last 24 chapters =)
Okay I have no clue if this story is over or not, I just started it, and after reading part one, I have to say I am super inrigied(wow I think I mangled that) to read more
I love the newest chapter and I cant believe how you made it end. Why couldnt it be don that was the one to walk in when she woke up. Oh Mac must be furious. Please update soon I really want to know what happens. You shouls read my story called to live and love in New York City