:yah That probably isn't the smiley to be using for a story like this, but ohmygod your sentences and your adjectives and the way you repeat things like twitchtwitchtwitch... it's gorgeous. That's the word for this story. Gorgeous. No, the subject matter isn't gorgeous - but the story was. Your writing is.
I have never read anything remotely like this. Ever.
It was like the narrator was a normal person, just pissed off at the way she's been treated and what she has to go through. Just a normal person with a blue baby in her chest. My god, how do you do it?
A cage within my own ribcage.
:yah That probably isn't the smiley to be using for a story like this, but ohmygod your sentences and your adjectives and the way you repeat things like twitchtwitchtwitch... it's gorgeous.
That's the word for this story. Gorgeous. No, the subject matter isn't gorgeous - but the story was. Your writing is.
I have never read anything remotely like this. Ever.
It was like the narrator was a normal person, just pissed off at the way she's been treated and what she has to go through. Just a normal person with a blue baby in her chest. My god, how do you do it?
Amazing.