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  • jam.

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    wow joe, this was really good, very very well written.
    April 20th, 2009 at 06:25pm
  • mannaquin

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    THat made me cry. How dare you. Now I am a pansy just like you:/ I've had this too. We all ahve. You maybe a leetle more than others. But still,it made me cry. Well written. you say you can't right but this is proof that when you right your heart is on your sleeve. Rather your heart is on the paper. This was. I am speechless.
    April 17th, 2009 at 12:58am
  • CourtneyRiot.

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    That was an amazing first chapter, and I totally want you to post the second
    April 1st, 2009 at 01:18am
  • sarcasticlove.

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    wel thats depressing......eally good.but depresessing
    March 24th, 2009 at 07:35pm