Claustrophobic - Comments

poor bell toms an ass

Amazing. Simply brilliant.

The way Bella wants to know what she would have been named if she were born a boy, the way she wanted, is a nice adding because then her name really would be more personal rather than some name she pulled out of her ass, you know?

Jeffree Star gig!
Lucky.

And I'm sorry about the boyfriend, I can't imagine how that feels.


I await more =]

WRRRRIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

write moooooooorrrrrrreeeeeeeee!!!!!
plleeeeeaaaaaassssseeeee!!!!!!!!!
=]

New reader!
-hello-

I plan on reviewing a lot, so be ready =]

First off, the summary or whatever. It's amazing. I was all thinking about it like 'Whoa, where's Bill? Who is Isabelle? What the crap is going on here, does she know that Tom had a twin or something and he's mad she never told him, what's the deal?!'
So I was reeling with thoughts before I even started the story so kudos, dude. Not many people can make me do that =]

The whole progression of Bella going through her therapy and needing her prescription, so set in her desire to be a boy, feeling incomplete, is absolutely fascinating, expecially how it's meshed with her pain of knowing that her twin is rejecting her simply for wanting to be the best she can be, how she feels. It's all very well tied together.
The hurt she feels when she thinks about her sibling not loving her and not even admitting to being that closely related to her because he's so ashamed is contagious; I feel hurt for her, but then you balanced it with a sweet, happy memory, one Bella wished she could go back to, and that's wonderful.

The whole thing is absolutely amazing, and a few spelling errors are pardoned.

The only thing I have to say, concrit wise, is I hope you've researched this. Sex change surgeries don't just happen like 'hey, Doc, I want a penis.' It's this whole big thing that takes a long time, from getting a year of therapy to having to take the proper hormones for a certain amount of time, and then all the different procedures don't take place all at once, and I hope you know that because this is a good story and I want you to make it completely authentic because it would be a thousand times better than it already is, and that is saying something :mrgreen:

I like this, and after all that^^, I think it's safe to assume I'm subscribing.

XOXO
-Morge

damn toms being an ass

Man, that sucks ass!!! Poor Isabelle!

poor bella

Man, Tomis a dickhead!

poor isabella

this is a new twist on kaulitzcest i love it

I like!!!!! update, bitte?

Another new story. :)
Hopefully I'll be updating quite often, not sure yet.

Comments are love, of course. (: