Redemption - Comments

i cried so many times while reading this story. i love it so much. can't wait for the sequel. where did she go?

Though you already finished this, and you finished it awhile ago.
THIS is my all time favorite fan fiction, and also just as a story :) I loved this is much and I think you are a talented writer :)
Some real talent here, and I loved ready your other stories. You are an amazing writer :)

Oh no she's gonna do something dramatic! That ending made me tearful! SEQUEL!!!

So bummed it has ended.
I've only just found this story as well!
Sequel :D can not wait! xxx

wow. she left.

good story.
I just can't believe she left.

I cried. Not in this chapter the one before it.
I was actually just thinking about this story the other day, I was going through the stories I had saved
And sha-bam it was there.
So, yeah. It was amazing.
: )

Aw! She ran away! :(
That just makes me wanna cry :/
Hopefully the sequel will sort that out though :)
Can't wait for it!

Aww! Lacy died!
:(
Nice of Joe to go with her to her burial though :D

GAH. [x i loved that last chapter. <33333
can't wait for the sequel! hopefully it'll be just as good as this one. :)

OH. MY. GOD. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a sequel!!! i think i might cry if you dont, cuz this is an amazing story and you cant just leave it like that!! PLEASE write a sequel!!!!!
ps: the ending really made me cry...he LOVES her!!!

The ending was really fitting for the story, it's about finding forgiveness within yourself. Of course, I was saddened when she left him, but I think that would have happened because it's inevitable. People live, people die, they laugh, they grow and they leave sometimes. I thought the note was really the more touching part, it showed that she truly cared and that it wasn't just a one-night stand. Beautiful.

shes stupid. Why would she leave him? How could she, for that matter? He was so sweet and shes just like if he really loves me then he'll understand... he couldn't have to if she didn't decide to leave.. meany :p

anywayy love the story either way, lol. <3 can't wait for that sequel.

that was amazing can't wait till the sequel is up

OMG!!! She LEFT him!?!?!? NOOOO!!!! I don't like that! Not at all! I totally don't think her therapist should've said anything about it. That wasn't fair. Mallory was basically blind-sided. And I seriously gasped when she smacked Joe. It was an OMG moment. I thought that it was gonna be a happy ending with them staying together after them BOTH saying that they loved each other. But noooo, you had to make her leave! Ugh! I'm so glad there is a sequel because I would be depressed if there wasn't. Post it soon!

GREAT STORY.!!!!
CANT WAIT FOR CHAP.20

This is very good. I like it.

your story is amazing i instantly fell in love with it plz update sooner

:O she stood up to charlie, wooohoo!
but aww lacy died ):
but her and joe are so cute :]
haha i love this story :]

Wow, so sorry about no commenting. Been on vacation.

This story is absolutely amazing! I'm so happy that she finally stood up to Charlie. He was a jerk. Sad that Lacy died, but everyone knew it was coming. And I'm glad that Joe is fighting for their relationship. His family will come around eventually. Update soon!

So, I am currently in tears right now... I feel so bad for Mallory and it's so sweet with Joe trying to help her. I just want you to know how you took on such a brave subject and turned it into a wonderful story. Sure, you have a few typos here and there... but it's still good and believable.