I finished this story in a day. It's absolutely amazing, I loved how Brian proposed, I actually had tears in my eyes can you believe it!!! i'm not an emotional person so... Yeah, you're an amazing writer c': i think i would have died of happiness if anyone did that to me haha. Just wow.
And, with an honorable mention for being the slowest, slackerest reader out there, I finally finished lol.
Man! The miscarriage broke my heart. I thought maybe she'd already been pregnant from Steven, I never considered that it was Brian's. That was awful but so well played, emotionally.
The surprise wedding was brilliant. I figured they'd watch the couple get married and then decide they wanted to do it. It was so massively sweet that he planned the whole thing out like that. You know how I am with romance but that made me say 'aw'. So high five for that lol.
As slow as I was with it, I loved the story. I'm sad that I missed the chapter where Brian cheated. I bet the reactions were hilarious. Anyway, this was fantastic and I'm going to move on the sequel.
I've got Brian all figured out! He just had that wedding so he didn't have to wear a tux! haha. But it was so adorable. And every time I imagine one of the guys holding a baby...it's just such a cute image! I thought it was funny when Matt "buckled in pain" as Val squeezed his hand. Never underestimate the strength of a woman during child birth. And I'm happy they're having twins! Totally subscribing to the sequel as well. Brilliant story! As always!
Damn, girl, I couldn't stop reading this story! haha. But I'm glad they found Eloise. And I know this is mean, but I was happy she had the miscarriage... Until I learned that it was Brian's. Then I was UBER SAD. But I've glanced at the latest comments, and apparently they get twins... So it's like making up for the lost child, right? I'm so sad for Eloise though. I know I'd feel horrible if that happened to me. Brilliant, doll! I couldn't stop reading!
Nooo! I knew...I just knew when she walked home all by herself that something like this would happen! It makes me so sad. Michelle....grr. I want to strangle her and hang her with a spork. It's not possible, but I'll make it work. Oh, and Steven...I'll punch him really hard in the crotch. And then kill him. =}
I'm so glad you're doing a sequel; I really want to know how this twins business is going to work out with Brian and El. This was an amazing story hun, and you did a wonderful job (yet again).
That was a fantastic ending to such a wonderful story :) Those two are certainly going to have their work cut out with twins, but they're going to make fantastic parents.
I loved the way Eloise was just as pissed as Val that they couldn't get hold of anyone :)
I can't wait for the sequel hun, because I've loved every moment of this story, and I know the next one will be just as amazing xx
Twins! :XD For a minute there my mind when towards the gutter when I heard "third leg." I was thinking they were finding out the sex of the baby. That ending was fantastic, and it just fit right. I dunno how to explain it, but hopefully you get what I mean. I can't wait for the sequel!
Grr! I want to read more, but I don't have the time! ={ Brilliant, doll. Oh, and I'm on Chapter 24 now. NO! ELOISE SHOULD BE WITH BRIAN NOW! I wonder what he'll do to convince her to get back with him. Will he go Rambo on us and kill them all himself? haha.
This is a little late but better than nothing. (I hope!)
Loved Jimmy's toast! I wish he could be at my future wedding, but as the groom of course. =P Very sweet end, just what they needed and deserved. To finally be happy and be together, in every way. =)
I missed the e-mail two says ago! Ugh, I hate school. Never have time for anything anymore. :grr: AWWWW! I loved this chapter, :XD and Jimmy's opening line was great. Wha--but...but....there's only one more?!? -sigh- I'll be really sad to see this one go, but I'm excited to read more of your others!
Movin on to the sequel!