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  • phoenix21

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    What!? What the fuck happened? What happened to Jain? And he did not just BITE her, that bastard. Dammit Alice, i was totally digging him! XD Good job, keep it coming. You better put Ch. 3 up soon. :D
    March 8th, 2009 at 09:44am
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    Oh. And i loved your tone of voice in the story. :D
    March 1st, 2009 at 08:15am
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    Alice you clever fiend you! Who is this yummy piece of man meat?! Dance I loved the names you gave them. You're always great with giving names. Thanks for putting it up. I can't wait to see were this goes!! Clap
    March 1st, 2009 at 08:12am
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