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  • shootmyselfinthehead

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    Awiesness! I almost didn't catch this update......
    But it was awesome and I want more!!!
    October 30th, 2007 at 08:01am
  • Franniestein

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    *Squeals*
    That was soooo cute!!!
    I love this story
    October 7th, 2007 at 10:18am
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    Wootage for the update!
    September 2nd, 2007 at 12:33pm
  • Franniestein

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    I didn't really trust that Adam dude
    but the rest was really cute
    loved it!
    <3
    August 29th, 2007 at 04:50am
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    Awies! Cute!
    August 25th, 2007 at 07:57am
  • sinsa-4-eva

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    I really like it. Please write more soon!!!
    August 14th, 2007 at 05:44am
  • Lil Miss. Panda

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    hes not moving to fast :P
    youll see why he did that :P
    August 14th, 2007 at 05:25am
  • Franniestein

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    I really really liked it but isn't he moving a little too fast with her?
    More soon sis Love YA!
    August 14th, 2007 at 05:16am
  • shootmyselfinthehead

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    Wooooot! Need more! Now!
    August 13th, 2007 at 07:26am
  • Franniestein

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    hahah aww that was too cute so i think I've read that part about two or three times now
    Don't kill yourself writting more
    August 12th, 2007 at 01:36am
  • Franniestein

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    I miss this story
    July 11th, 2007 at 04:45am
  • Franniestein

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    Few spelling and gramatical errors but other than that I loved it!
    June 30th, 2007 at 07:43pm
  • shootmyselfinthehead

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    Loved the update! I can't wait for more!
    June 30th, 2007 at 04:26am
  • Franniestein

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    haha I already read this before but I love it
    you're off to a great start sis can't wait for more!
    June 27th, 2007 at 01:43am
  • shootmyselfinthehead

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    Interesting...*subscribes*

    I think you could benefit from having a line between dialogue. It'll make the story flow a bit more, and aid the reader in understanding. Just a thought.
    June 27th, 2007 at 01:37am
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