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  • Kristina_A

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    ooooh damn!! He pulled the "shut up, yes I like you" move with the kiss there. I LOVED it. Perfect!
    March 18th, 2009 at 04:06am
  • hockeydancer

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    YAYYYY :D

    ahhh please post asap, its killing me not to know whats gonna happen next! lol
    March 18th, 2009 at 03:56am
  • jirrithxx419

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    ah shit... it's so going down!
    HE KISSED HER! what's gonna happen now?
    I HEART THIS!
    March 18th, 2009 at 03:43am
  • jirrithxx419

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    aww, that was so cute! although, it didn't surprise me when he said yes... it's just... yeah
    but I heart this!
    March 16th, 2009 at 02:05am
  • slowburnbaby

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    Ahh! I loved it!
    I bet Sid's gonna break his own rule for sure.
    or at least kiss jocelyn first!
    March 15th, 2009 at 03:51am
  • hockeydancer

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    Oh I like your update!
    Hmm, come on Sidney - go shake that booty of yours ;) ha
    cant wait to read more!
    March 15th, 2009 at 03:39am
  • kristinaoshea

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    Another exciting chapter =]
    I like that he's starting to warm up to having a life outside of hockey =]
    Cute dress.
    March 15th, 2009 at 02:58am
  • jirrithxx419

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    Cliffhanger? Come ON! like SERIOUSLY!
    I want to know what he says! even tho it'll probably be a no...
    i heart this
    March 14th, 2009 at 07:00am
  • Yakitori

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    This story... intrigues me. The concept and the story is so original. I hope you update soon!
    March 14th, 2009 at 06:46am
  • girlygurl2614

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    Awesome post! Keep It UP!!!
    March 14th, 2009 at 06:36am
  • hockeydancer

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    I like it!! HAHA, the girl planning on sleeping with Max, hmm guess that wont work to well. Cant wait to see what happens next!
    March 14th, 2009 at 06:16am
  • jirrithxx419

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    I could have sworn that I subscribed to this... apparently not though.
    1. Jocelyn was the name of my roommate ast year, and I LOVE her to death
    2. She works for the Pittsburgh Steelers? i really loathe that team, since they're the rivals to my fav team
    3. i heart this a LOT!
    March 14th, 2009 at 05:39am
  • slowburnbaby

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    Wow another amazing chapter!!!!
    Jocelyn is definitely my favorite character at this point.
    March 12th, 2009 at 12:11am
  • kristinaoshea

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    Another great chapter! I love how the team seems like they would rather get Sid laid than win a game =]
    March 9th, 2009 at 11:43pm
  • hockeydancer

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    Oooh la la, I like it! Can't wait to see where you take it next!
    March 8th, 2009 at 05:44pm
  • slowburnbaby

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    I seriously love this story sooooo much! it makes me giggle uncontrolably.
    March 8th, 2009 at 04:47pm
  • Kristina_A

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    Oh, I can't wait to see what he has to say!! =D
    March 7th, 2009 at 09:38am
  • mully17

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    Soooo good!!!!!! to short of a chapter stupid cliffhangers again lol
    March 7th, 2009 at 06:12am
  • pensbaby87

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    I really like this. :)
    It helps that it revolves around my favorite person in the universe, Sid, and my second favorite person on the universe, Max, haha. But really. I'm interested to see where this goes. Can't wait for the next chapter!
    March 7th, 2009 at 01:51am
  • slowburnbaby

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    Ahhh! I can't wait for more=) i love how sarcastic Jocelyn is
    March 4th, 2009 at 10:07pm
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