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  • method acting.

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    Well done on third :cute:
    I reaaaaally like the edge this has, and your choice of phobia.
    Especially the way you did it from a males point of view.
    It's really well written too, well done.
    April 15th, 2009 at 01:20pm
  • Zachary Merrick.

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    I like how he managed to face his fear at the end.
    It was amazing, it's not bad at all!
    April 14th, 2009 at 09:15am
  • See.

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    It's not bad at all! It's brilliant.
    I love how he knows how ridiculous his phobia is, but he just can't help it.
    And how he fell in love...<3333
    At first, it was a little hard to understand, but I reread it, and I think I've got it.
    This was amazing, love. =)
    April 14th, 2009 at 02:54am
  • stay gone;

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    this is reallly good. I liked how he fell in love :cute:
    April 11th, 2009 at 05:42pm
  • sectumsempra

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    Oh, wow. That was magnificent!

    I liked how no one died as well. :XD

    I agree, it was very raw. It was well-written, and it flowed really well. I loved it. :arms:
    April 11th, 2009 at 09:35am
  • Flynn Rider

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    You're good. Really, you are.
    Your story was just so... Raw.
    And I love the phobia choice Naughty
    April 11th, 2009 at 03:09am
  • painterr

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    Wow, that was actually so so good.
    I loved it.

    Although I got a bit confused at one point, I managed to sort it out. I liked it, thought it was well good. :D
    March 1st, 2009 at 07:10pm
  • Springsteen.

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    ohh, I really like this. It's original.
    No one dies! hah. It seems a lot of people are causing their characters to die because of their fears, but that's cool, too.
    Anyways, this story was quite amazing. Good work.
    March 1st, 2009 at 02:58am
  • TaySpeegs

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    a little hard to follow at the end but i get the story--i tried to read fast, 8) i think the story is great and i will read it all the time! you have a real talent with words is also what i noticed. you are a great writer. if someone says you arent great this is what id do :lmfao Ha Ha Ha Ha Disgust :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: so this should be you cuz u know your sooo good! :file: and most importantly Dance so you should be proud of yourself!
    March 1st, 2009 at 02:57am
  • summer girl.

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    Hello darlingg.

    This, is utterly freaking stunning.
    No lie.

    I like it. I had to reread it to get it, but that's only cause I have a tendency to go a bit too quickly:]

    Ohhh...and your link in the contest doesn't work...did you change the name of the story? They don't match up :/
    March 1st, 2009 at 02:04am
  • Glamophonic

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    I like this, but it is kind of hard to understand.
    March 1st, 2009 at 01:38am
  • bethlynBACKLASH

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    wow.. this is good.. but honestly. i don't get it..
    March 1st, 2009 at 12:58am
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